List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and natural, but it is a bit long and contains some redundancy. Try to be more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find it relaxing to choose items spontaneously. However, if I see something I like, I add it to my cart, which helps me remember what I need to buy.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas more clearly, use proper sentence structures, and include linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Sometimes I make a list for work when there are many steps involved. This helps me clearly see what tasks I need to complete and how much time I have left, so I can focus on the most important parts.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and slightly confusing. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because seeing many tasks at once can be overwhelming and stressful. As a result, they might find it hard to start their work when faced with a long list.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to improve flow.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I often get distracted when using my phone. Having the list on paper, stuck near my computer, helps me remember tasks more easily.

× If I saw something I really like, I would put it in my cart and uh, it reminds me to think about what things I need to buy.

✓ If I see something I really like, I put it in my cart and, uh, it reminds me to think about what things I need to buy.

The sentence mixes past tense 'saw' with present tense 'like' and 'reminds'. To maintain consistency and reflect habitual action, present tense 'see' and 'put' should be used. This ensures subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage for habitual actions.

× Well, sometimes I would make a list for my work if there are so many different steps 'cause when I have a list, I will have a very clear line for what the thing, what other things that I need to do and how much time that I left to make a list will make me realize which part I should pay, how much attention that would be.

✓ Well, sometimes I make a list for my work if there are so many different steps because when I have a list, I have a very clear idea of what things I need to do and how much time I have left. Making a list helps me realize which parts I should pay more attention to.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'would make' and mixes tenses. Using present tense 'make', 'have', and 'helps' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× You may feel, wow, there are so many, so much pressure that some people may feel it's uneasy to start their tasks if they see so many different things to do.

✓ You may feel, wow, there is so much pressure that some people may find it uneasy to start their tasks if they see so many different things to do.

The phrase 'so many, so much pressure' is incorrect because 'pressure' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'so much'. Also, 'it's uneasy' is better expressed as 'find it uneasy' for clarity and correctness.

× But when I made this on paper I can see it.

✓ But when I make this on paper, I can see it.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'made' while the rest of the sentence is in present tense. Using present tense 'make' maintains tense consistency and correctly reflects habitual action.

× I would stick on my computer, I can see it all the time.

✓ I would stick it on my computer so I can see it all the time.

The phrase 'stick on my computer' lacks an object and proper conjunction. Adding 'it' as the object and connecting the clauses with 'so' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.