List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say "Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping." Also, avoid unnecessary words and keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and could be clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas, and be specific. For example, say "I don't usually make lists for work because I am a student, but I do make notes for my studies. This helps me save time and manage my schedule effectively."

Example: I don't usually make lists for work since I am a student, but I do make notes for my studies because it helps me save time and manage my schedule better.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and repetition. Also, the word "leaves" seems incorrect here. Try to be more precise and use linking words. For example, "Some people avoid making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel independent."

Example: Some people avoid making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel more independent that way.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, "I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and allows me to make notes anywhere easily."

Example: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and allows me to make notes anywhere easily.

× Yes, of course I am. Do make the notes while I am going to shop.

✓ Yes, of course I do. I make notes when I go shopping.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I am' instead of 'I do' to answer a question about habitual action. Also, 'Do make the notes while I am going to shop' is ungrammatical; the correct form is 'I make notes when I go shopping' to express habitual action in present tense.

× Honestly speaking, I don't usually work, but in the case of studies I make note.

✓ Honestly speaking, I don't usually work, but in the case of studies I make notes.

The word 'note' should be plural 'notes' because it refers to multiple items or pieces of information taken down. Using singular 'note' here is incorrect when referring to the general action of making notes.

× It helps me to save times and it is easy to manage the time.

✓ It helps me to save time and it is easy to manage time.

The word 'times' is incorrect here; 'time' is an uncountable noun and should be used in singular form. Also, 'the time' can be simplified to 'time' for general meaning.

× Yes, of course there are some individuals who avoid making leaves because it's like they they don't want to depend on anybody else.

✓ Yes, of course there are some individuals who avoid making lists because it's like they don't want to depend on anybody else.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'lists' as the discussion is about making lists. 'Leaves' is unrelated and causes confusion.

× They want to deal the situation on basis of their memory.

✓ They want to deal with the situation on the basis of their memory.

The verb 'deal' requires the preposition 'with' to form the correct phrase 'deal with the situation'. Also, 'on basis' should be 'on the basis' to be grammatically correct.

× Honestly speaking, I prefer to make list on my mobile phone.

✓ Honestly speaking, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general action of making multiple lists. Also, 'on my mobile phone' is correct prepositional usage here.