List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "or say it's a benefit for my time."

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting important items.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid redundant or unclear phrases like "loss projective for timing."

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks efficiently. Although some people think it wastes time, I believe it actually saves me time in the long run.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer linking words. Also, avoid repeating the word "list" unnecessarily.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. However, I think lists are very useful and help people remember important tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "that is a very unique thing."

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to access. Whenever I need to check my shopping list, I just open my phone and look at it.

× Yes, I make a list of when I shop or say it's a benefit for my time.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because I think it's beneficial for my time.

The phrase 'of when I shop or say it's a benefit for my time' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'say' is incorrectly used here. Instead, use 'because' to explain the reason and 'beneficial' as the correct adjective form. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Obviously it's work, but many people think that it's a, it's a wrong timing.

✓ Obviously it works, but many people think that it's the wrong timing.

The phrase 'it's work' is incorrect; the verb should be 'works' to indicate function. Also, 'a wrong timing' is incorrect; 'timing' is uncountable here and should be preceded by 'the' without 'a'. This corrects verb form and article usage.

× I mean, it's a loss projective for timing, but I think it's a very benefit because it's a, it's give me much more time.

✓ I mean, it's a loss perspective for timing, but I think it's very beneficial because it gives me much more time.

'Loss projective' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'loss perspective'. 'A very benefit' is wrong; 'benefit' is a noun, so use 'very beneficial' (adjective). Also, 'it's give me' should be 'it gives me' to agree with the subject and tense.

× Because people think that it's a waste of time, that's why they don't like making list.

✓ Because people think that it's a waste of time, that's why they don't like making lists.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× But I think it's a very unique and remindable thing for making list.

✓ But I think it's a very unique and memorable thing to make lists.

'Remindable' is not a correct word; the intended word is 'memorable'. Also, 'for making list' is awkward; 'to make lists' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Actually I like both, but I prefer that phone Is the best way to keep note my shopping list 'cause it's helpful for and when I get when I remind them I hold my phone and then I check my list.

✓ Actually, I like both, but I prefer the phone because it is the best way to keep notes of my shopping list. It's helpful when I remember to hold my phone and then check my list.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'prefer that phone Is' should be 'prefer the phone because it is'; 'keep note my shopping list' should be 'keep notes of my shopping list'; 'helpful for and when I get when I remind them' is unclear and corrected to 'helpful when I remember'; overall sentence structure is improved for clarity.