List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat langsung yang menjawab pertanyaan dan hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu.

Example: I usually don't make a shopping list unless I plan to cook something special. In that case, I write down all the detailed ingredients I need to buy to avoid forgetting anything.

Suggestion: Jawaban kurang fokus dan berulang. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan jelas.

Example: I only make a detailed list when I plan to cook because it helps me remember all the ingredients. This method works well since I don't miss anything important.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas serta lengkap. Tambahkan linking words untuk memperjelas alasan dan membuat jawaban lebih terstruktur.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because it can be complicated and time-consuming. Moreover, spontaneous individuals prefer to think on the spot rather than plan ahead.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan jelas untuk menyampaikan preferensi dengan alasan yang spesifik.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. If I use paper, I worry that I might lose it or forget that I have it.

× When I show I think I never make a list except if I plan to cooking something.

✓ When I shop I think I never make a list except if I plan to cook something.

The verb 'plan' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'cook', not the '-ing' form 'cooking'. The correct structure is 'plan to cook'.

× There will be very details ingredients that I need to buy, but nevertheless I never make it.

✓ There will be very detailed ingredients that I need to buy, but nevertheless I never make it.

The adjective 'details' is incorrect here; it should be 'detailed' to describe 'ingredients'. 'Detailed' means having many details, which fits the context.

× I will make a detailed list only when I plan to cooking something and it will work very good because I will not miss anything because there are many things that I need to buy that maybe if I didn't use it.

✓ I will make a detailed list only when I plan to cook something and it will work very well because I will not miss anything since there are many things that I need to buy that maybe I wouldn't use.

Again, 'plan to' should be followed by the base verb 'cook', not 'cooking'. Also, 'very good' should be 'very well' as it modifies the verb 'work'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I think some people don't like making this because it can be quite complicated and time consuming, so people who is spontaneous will think it is just complicated because they prefer to think on the spot rather than to.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it can be quite complicated and time-consuming, so people who are spontaneous will think it is just complicated because they prefer to think on the spot rather than plan ahead.

'Making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer. 'People who is' should be 'people who are' for subject-verb agreement. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. The sentence ending 'rather than to' is incomplete; it should be 'rather than plan ahead' or similar.

× Think I like more to write in my phone because I always bring my phone to any place if I use a paper.

✓ I think I prefer to write on my phone because I always bring my phone wherever I go, but if I use paper, I might forget it.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Think I like more' should be 'I think I prefer'. 'Write in my phone' should be 'write on my phone'. 'To any place' is better as 'wherever I go'. The second clause is rephrased for clarity.

× I just worried that I will miss it and I will forget that I ever bring it and just throw it.

✓ I am just worried that I will lose it and forget that I ever brought it and just throw it away.

'I just worried' lacks the auxiliary verb 'am'. 'Miss it' is better expressed as 'lose it' in this context. 'Bring' should be past tense 'brought' to match 'ever'. Added 'away' after 'throw it' for completeness.