Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Will that depend on different situations? Well, that depend on different situations. And sometimes I have a lot of items I want to buy. I will write it on my papers or on my digital apps and to remind me that I have a lot of important things to buy in case I forget it.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Well, I definitely prefer to make a list on my when I'm working because I like to write some important things or some things I need to do on my weather, on my social apps or on the papers. And then whenever I finish it, I will fill a sense of accomplishment and it also improve my work.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Well, that's probably because someone those who don't like be restricted by some rules and they more like spontaneity and flexibility and they like to just do their things whenever they wanted to do and they don't have to.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use app my Apple iPhone to communicate and to do my work. And whenever I want to check my list I will just Skype my iPhone and.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的时态和单复数形式。
Example: Yes, it depends on the situation. When I have many items to buy, I usually write a list on paper or use a digital app to remind myself so I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,且部分词汇使用不当。建议明确表达,避免模糊词汇,使用正确的语法结构。
Example: Yes, I prefer to make lists when I work because I write down important tasks on my phone apps or on paper. Completing these tasks gives me a sense of accomplishment and helps me improve my work efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误较多,句子结构混乱,表达不够连贯。建议使用简单句,注意主谓一致,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer spontaneity and flexibility. They want to do things whenever they feel like it without being restricted by rules.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不完整且存在语法错误,表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题,避免使用不相关的词汇,确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It's convenient to check and update my list anytime using apps on my iPhone.
× Will that depend on different situations?
✓ Does that depend on different situations?
这里使用一般现在时态的疑问句,应该用助动词does而不是will,因为询问的是习惯性或一般情况。
× Well, that depend on different situations.
✓ Well, that depends on different situations.
主语是单数第三人称that,谓语动词depend应加-s,表示第三人称单数形式。
× I will write it on my papers or on my digital apps and to remind me that I have a lot of important things to buy in case I forget it.
✓ I will write it on my paper or on my digital apps to remind me that I have a lot of important things to buy in case I forget them.
paper通常不可数,表示纸张时用单数;forget后面指代复数things,应该用复数代词them。
× Well, I definitely prefer to make a list on my when I'm working because I like to write some important things or some things I need to do on my weather, on my social apps or on the papers.
✓ Well, I definitely prefer to make a list when I'm working because I like to write some important things or some things I need to do on my weather app, on my social apps or on paper.
句中“on my”后缺少名词,推测是“weather app”;paper通常不可数,前面不加冠词。
× And then whenever I finish it, I will fill a sense of accomplishment and it also improve my work.
✓ And then whenever I finish it, I will feel a sense of accomplishment and it also improves my work.
动词fill用错,应该用feel;主语it是第三人称单数,谓语动词improve应加-s。
× Well, that's probably because someone those who don't like be restricted by some rules and they more like spontaneity and flexibility and they like to just do their things whenever they wanted to do and they don't have to.
✓ Well, that's probably because some people don't like to be restricted by rules and they prefer spontaneity and flexibility and like to just do their things whenever they want to and they don't have to.
someone用错,应为some people;like后接动词不定式to be;wanted应为want,保持时态一致。
× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use app my Apple iPhone to communicate and to do my work.
✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use my Apple iPhone apps to communicate and to do my work.
app位置错误,应为my Apple iPhone apps;apps为复数形式。
× And whenever I want to check my list I will just Skype my iPhone and.
✓ And whenever I want to check my list, I will just use my iPhone.
句子结构不完整,Skype用法不当,应改为use my iPhone,且句末不应有and。