List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'avoid to forget'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc đúng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a new recipe without forgetting anything.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tưởng bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I don't usually make lists for my work, but I think it's very important because it can save time and help organize tasks effectively.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý kiến rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a strict plan.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I only use my phone every time'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's easy to check and update my list anytime and anywhere.

× I can avoid to forget everything I want to buy.

✓ I can avoid forgetting everything I want to buy.

The verb 'avoid' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, not the infinitive 'to forget'. Therefore, 'avoid forgetting' is correct.

× I don't usually mix early when I work because but I think it's a very important.

✓ I don't usually mix early when I work, but I think it's very important.

The conjunctions 'because' and 'but' are incorrectly combined. Only one conjunction should be used to connect clauses. Here, 'but' is appropriate to show contrast.

× I don't usually mix early when I work because but I think it's a very important.

✓ I don't usually mix early when I work, but I think it's very important.

The phrase 'a very important' is incomplete; 'important' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify or should be used without 'a'. Here, 'very important' without 'a' is correct.

× It can save your time and can list everything you need to complete the task.

✓ It can save your time and list everything you need to complete the task.

The pronoun 'can' is unnecessarily repeated before 'list'. The correct structure is 'can save... and list...'. Also, 'your time' is acceptable but 'time' alone is more natural.

× To be honest, I think it's very worth my time and some people think like me, but some someone thinks it can improve your productive but they don't like mechanism.

✓ To be honest, I think it's worth my time and some people think like me, but some people think it can improve your productivity, but they don't like the mechanism.

The phrase 'very worth my time' is incorrect; 'worth my time' is correct. 'Some someone' is incorrect; 'some people' is correct. 'Your productive' should be 'your productivity'. Also, 'the mechanism' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I only use my phone every time and every day and you can bring it everywhere so it's a very helpful to easily to check.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use my phone all the time and every day, and you can bring it everywhere, so it's very helpful and easy to check.

The phrase 'only use my phone every time' is unnatural; 'use my phone all the time' is better. 'It's a very helpful to easily to check' is incorrect; 'helpful' is an adjective and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'easy to check' is the correct phrase.