Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yeah, when I go shopping I usually make a list to help me memorize what I should buy in the supermarket, and I enjoy the sense of taking the items off 1 by 1 after making a list.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yeah, when I was studying, I usually make a list because making a list will reduce my stress about work and help me stay organized. Making a list will let me know what I should do in a day and let me do not forget about the important things.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Umm, well, some people are averse to making lists. I think maybe they are uh, they have a good memory and they do not rely on the list to help them remember everything.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I have an calendar app on my phone so that I can set my reminders and check the schedule wherever I am. It's super convenient compared with writing a list on a paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构较为简单,且有些表达不够自然,例如“help me memorize”可以改为“help me remember”。建议使用更地道的表达,并注意句子连贯性。
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to help me remember the items I need to buy. I also enjoy the feeling of crossing off each item as I find it, which makes shopping more organized and satisfying.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中时态使用不够准确,且句子有些重复。建议注意时态一致性,避免重复表达,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Example: Yes, when I was studying, I usually made lists because they helped reduce my stress and kept me organized. By making a list, I knew exactly what tasks I needed to complete each day and didn't forget important things.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有口头语“umm, well, uh”影响流畅度,且表达不够具体。建议减少口头语,使用更自然的表达,并给出更具体的理由。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to keep things in their mind. Additionally, they might find lists restrictive or time-consuming to create.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容完整且表达清晰,但有些小错误,如“an calendar”应为“a calendar”,以及“on a paper”应为“on paper”。建议注意冠词使用和固定搭配。
Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I have a calendar app that allows me to set reminders and check my schedule anytime, anywhere. This is much more convenient than writing lists on paper.
× Yeah, when I was studying, I usually make a list because making a list will reduce my stress about work and help me stay organized.
✓ Yeah, when I was studying, I usually made a list because making a list reduced my stress about work and helped me stay organized.
这里的时间状语是过去时(when I was studying),所以动词也应该用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态,时态不一致。建议将动词改为过去时以保持时态一致。
× It's super convenient compared with writing a list on a paper.
✓ It's super convenient compared with writing a list on paper.
在英语中,表示“在纸上”时,通常不加冠词“a”,直接用“on paper”。加了“a”是不正确的用法。建议去掉“a”。