Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping. I think make a list can help me know by what more clearly.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I always make a list on my work and I will use spare the work into small assignments and color and listed and neatly listed. I will feel less pressure.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think they may don't want to be controlled and making lists may let them feel pressure into the will decrease their efficiency.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
If it's small tasks such as buy milk or take out the trash, I will remember it on my mind and hope I won't forget it quickly. If it's big tasks, I will remember it on my phone or paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,建议加强语法基础,尤其是动词短语的正确使用。同时,回答内容较简单,可以增加具体细节使回答更丰富。
Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中表达不清晰,语法和词汇使用不准确,建议练习如何清楚地表达分解任务和使用列表的过程,并注意句子结构。
Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work. I break down big tasks into smaller parts and organize them by color, which helps me feel less stressed and more productive.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误较多,表达不流畅,建议学习如何用正确的句型表达原因,并注意逻辑连贯。
Example: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel controlled by them, which can cause stress and reduce their efficiency.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然,但句子结构和用词仍有提升空间。建议练习更准确地表达不同情况的偏好,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Example: For small tasks like buying milk or taking out the trash, I usually keep them in my mind. However, for bigger tasks, I prefer to make a list on my phone or paper to avoid forgetting anything.
× I think make a list can help me know by what more clearly.
✓ I think making a list can help me know what to buy more clearly.
动词think后面接动名词making,而不是动词原形make。这里需要用动名词形式表示动作。
× I always make a list on my work and I will use spare the work into small assignments and color and listed and neatly listed.
✓ I always make a list for my work and I will split the work into small assignments, color-code them, and list them neatly.
短语中应使用介词for表示“为……做清单”,而不是on。动词use后面搭配split更合适,且表达更清晰。
× I think they may don't want to be controlled and making lists may let them feel pressure into the will decrease their efficiency.
✓ I think they may not want to be controlled, and making lists may make them feel pressured, which will decrease their efficiency.
may后面应接动词原形not want,而不是may don't want。连接词and前后句子结构应平行,且表达更通顺。
× Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?
平行结构中应保持介词一致,两个选项都应使用on。
× If it's small tasks such as buy milk or take out the trash, I will remember it on my mind and hope I won't forget it quickly.
✓ If they are small tasks such as buying milk or taking out the trash, I will remember them in my mind and hope I won't forget them quickly.
tasks是复数,需用they或them代替。短语remember in my mind更自然,buy和take应改为动名词形式以匹配句子结构。