List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use the correct word 'list' instead of 'leaves' and keep your answer clear and concise. Start with a direct response, then add a reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and aim for natural phrasing.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting important items.

Suggestion: Use the correct word 'lists' instead of 'links' and start with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas and avoid fragmented sentences. Keep your answer within 4-5 sentences for clarity.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work so that I can organise my schedule and keep track of my tasks. This helps me complete my daily goals efficiently and stay focused.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use the correct word 'lists' instead of 'leaves'. Start with a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'as'. Try to be more precise and natural in your explanation.

Example: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it feels restrictive and time-consuming. They might prefer a more flexible approach to managing their tasks.

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'book booklets' and 'not that and'. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'now' to show contrast and sequence. Keep your sentences clear and concise for better coherence.

Example: I used to make my to-do lists on paper notebooks, but now I prefer using the notepad on my phone because it's always with me and easier to carry around.

× While making the leaves, it makes me easier to remember all the leaves and it helps me to maintain the required things that I need to do shopping and.

✓ While making the list, it makes it easier for me to remember all the items and helps me to keep track of the things I need to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'leaves' instead of 'list' and has awkward phrasing. 'Making the leaves' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making the list'. Also, 'it makes me easier' should be 'it makes it easier for me' to correctly express the idea. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to make links in my work so that I can fit into the schedule and track my record.

✓ I prefer to make lists in my work so that I can fit into the schedule and track my progress.

The word 'links' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'lists'. Also, 'track my record' is awkward; 'track my progress' is more appropriate. The pronoun usage is corrected by replacing 'links' with the correct noun 'lists'.

× What are the things that I need to do for the day and it helps me to achieve my task for the day and ultimately achieve the goal.

✓ It helps me identify the tasks I need to do for the day, achieve them, and ultimately reach my goals.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks proper structure. It starts with a question form but continues as a statement without proper connection. The sentence is restructured to form a clear, complete statement that logically connects the ideas.

× Uh, from my opinion, I feel that, uh, some people, they don't like to make leaves, uh, because it is very monitoring and it, uh, consumes time and they don't like, I feel that they don't like, uh, the feeling of being restricted to.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like to make lists because it feels very controlling, it consumes time, and they don't like the feeling of being restricted.

The phrase 'from my opinion' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in my opinion'. 'Make leaves' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'. The phrase 'it is very monitoring' is awkward; 'it feels very controlling' is clearer. The sentence is also simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Before I used to do my To Do List in paper and a book booklets.

✓ Before, I used to make my To Do List on paper and in booklets.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'paper'; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. Also, 'do my To Do List' is awkward; 'make my To Do List' is better. The phrase 'a book booklets' is redundant; corrected to 'in booklets'.

× Now I'm I have moved to notepad in my phone because phone is always with me and it is easy to carry and always I remember what I have written in the not that and.

✓ Now, I have moved to using the notepad on my phone because my phone is always with me, it is easy to carry, and I always remember what I have written in the notepad.

The original sentence has redundancy ('I'm I have'), missing articles ('the notepad'), and awkward phrasing ('not that and'). The sentence is corrected for clarity, proper article usage, and smoother flow.