List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and lengthy. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or example.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me buy things quickly and efficiently. For instance, when I have a list, I don't forget any items and can finish shopping faster.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas clearly. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and check for grammar accuracy.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list of my daily tasks because it helps me track my progress effectively. This method always works well for me and keeps me organised.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has many repetitions and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons logically.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because it feels like extra work and can be stressful. They may find it difficult to sit down and plan what they need to do.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, check for grammar and sentence structure.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to access. Since I always carry my phone, I don't have to worry about forgetting a paper list when I go shopping.

× I do make a list when I go to shop because making a list makes the work much easier for me because if I make a list of things that I should purchase, it will be more easier and quite fast for me to make my purchase or shopping done.

✓ I do make a list when I go shopping because making a list makes the work much easier for me because if I make a list of things that I should purchase, it will be easier and quite fast for me to complete my shopping.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which is a common English expression. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is redundant and should be removed.

× So I do make list for shopping.

✓ So I do make a list for shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because making a list of tasks like a quick or daily daily task that I should meet makes me much easier to track my progress and it always does does work for me.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because making a list of tasks like quick or daily tasks that I should complete makes it much easier for me to track my progress and it always works for me.

The phrase 'daily daily task' is repetitive and should be 'daily tasks' in plural form. Also, 'makes me much easier' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it much easier for me' to correctly express the idea. 'Does does work' is a repetition and should be 'works'.

× I think that people some some people don't like making lists because it it feels like like a bit more amount of work and stressful for some people because they need to sit down and make or think what they need to need to do so.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists because it feels like a bit more work and is stressful for some people because they need to sit down and think about what they need to do.

Repeated words like 'some some', 'it it', and 'like like' are errors and should be removed. 'A bit more amount of work' is incorrect; 'a bit more work' is correct. 'Make or think what they need to need to do so' is awkward; it should be 'think about what they need to do'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because making list on my phone is so easy for me to access because if I'm writing on it a paper, I may forget to take the paper and when I go to shopping, but I do always carry my phone with me, so it's good.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because making a list on my phone is so easy for me to access. If I write it on paper, I may forget to take the paper when I go shopping, but I always carry my phone with me, so it's good.

The phrase 'writing on it a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'write it on paper'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The sentence was also split for clarity and correctness.