List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same points. Also, focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from spending money on unnecessary items, so I only purchase things that I really need for daily use.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, avoiding filler words. Use proper sentence structure and explain how making lists helps you avoid unnecessary purchases.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work-related shopping. I usually write down the items I need on my phone or on paper, which helps me avoid buying things I don't need. This method works well for me.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and provide specific details.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time to write everything down. Instead, they prefer to rely on their memory to remember what they need to buy, which they find more convenient.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by organizing your ideas more clearly and using linking words. Also, avoid repeating words and ensure correct grammar. Explain your reasons in a logical order.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, making it convenient. Moreover, I can easily share my list with friends or family if needed. Therefore, I usually use a notes app to keep track of my shopping list.

× because it's helped me to remind remember the things which I need to do

✓ because it has helped me to remember the things which I need to do

The phrase 'it's helped' is a contraction of 'it is helped', which is incorrect here. The correct form is the present perfect 'it has helped' to indicate an action that has relevance to the present. Also, 'remind remember' is redundant; 'remember' alone is appropriate.

× because and always help me to didn't spend a lot of money on on the things that I didn't need it

✓ because it always helps me not to spend a lot of money on things that I don't need

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly placed and the verb forms are wrong. 'Help me to didn't spend' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me not to spend'. Also, 'didn't need it' should be 'don't need' to maintain present tense and avoid unnecessary pronoun 'it'.

× So I just need to buy the things that I really need in my daily uses

✓ So I just need to buy the things that I really need for my daily use

The phrase 'daily uses' is incorrect; 'daily use' is an uncountable noun here and should be singular.

× whenever I go to do SH, uh, shopping or doing groceries, so I always make to write up, write down on the paper or uh, on my phone to whatever I need to buy or whatever

✓ whenever I go shopping or do groceries, I always write down on paper or on my phone whatever I need to buy

The phrase 'go to do SH' is awkward and incorrect; 'go shopping' is correct. 'Make to write up' is incorrect; 'write down' suffices. The conjunction 'or whatever' is unnecessary and confusing.

× I didn't need it at all

✓ I don't need it at all

The sentence refers to present habits, so present tense 'don't need' is appropriate instead of past tense 'didn't need'. Also, 'it' is unnecessary here and can be omitted.

× So it helped me to, uh, purchased unnecessary. It helps.

✓ So it helps me avoid purchasing unnecessary items.

The phrase 'helped me to purchased' is incorrect; after 'helped me to' the base form 'purchase' should be used. Also, 'purchased unnecessary' is incomplete; 'purchasing unnecessary items' is correct. The sentence 'It helps.' is redundant and unclear.

× And they like to making list because they think it's a wastage of time

✓ And they don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time

The original sentence contradicts itself; 'like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'like making'. Also, 'wastage' is less common; 'waste' is preferred. The meaning suggests they do not like making lists, so 'don't like' is correct.

× It took a lot of time to do, uh, write on the paper, write down all the lists on the paper or on the phone

✓ It takes a lot of time to write down all the lists on paper or on the phone

The verb tense should be present to match the general statement. 'Took' is past tense; 'takes' is present. Also, 'to do, uh, write' is awkward; 'to write down' is sufficient.

× So they didn't prefer to do the list making list, but they prefer to go with the whatever exactly they need to buy it

✓ So they don't prefer to make lists, but they prefer to buy exactly what they need

The sentence mixes past and present tense; 'didn't prefer' should be 'don't prefer' for general truth. 'Do the list making list' is incorrect; 'make lists' is correct. 'Go with the whatever exactly they need to buy it' is awkward and incorrect; simplified to 'buy exactly what they need'.

× They always remember on their mind, so they didn't need it

✓ They always remember in their mind, so they don't need to

The phrase 'remember on their mind' is incorrect; 'remember in their mind' is correct. Also, 'didn't need it' should be 'don't need to' to maintain present tense and avoid unnecessary pronoun.

× Phone because it it helped me I'm carrying my phone always with me so it's easy to carry Moreover, I can share my list with my friends or with my parents that if I need to do so

✓ Phone, because it helps me. I always carry my phone with me, so it's easy to carry. Moreover, I can share my list with my friends or parents if I need to

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. 'It it helped me I'm carrying' is incorrect; should be 'it helps me. I always carry'. Also, 'that if I need to do so' is awkward; simplified to 'if I need to'.

× So I always prefer to write it down on the on my phone app like I'm using notes always so

✓ So I always prefer to write it down on my phone app, like I always use Notes

The phrase 'on the on my phone app' is incorrect; 'on my phone app' is correct. Also, 'using notes always' is awkward; 'always use Notes' is better. 'Notes' as an app name is capitalized.