List— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, of course. I make a list before I go to the shop and this list makes me very aware of what I need to buy and what I don't need to buy. When I buy something I don't really need, I think it is a waste of money. So that's why I formed the habit of making a list when I shop.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, of course. I make a list for my work and it works very well for me personally speaking. I started making this and work at about 18 years old and I am happy when I can find that I accomplish all the tasks I list for the work. It's a kind of Internet.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think some of the people, they may be lazy to make a list because making lists need a lot of thoughts and other things that to make us do things more efficiently. And some people don't have the habit of making a list. They believe themselves to do the best. So that's.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Speaking of making a list, I prefer to make lists on the paper and I stick it on my walls because if I making this on my phone, I would forgot to check my phone and so that's not effective I think. But if I write it down and see it everywhere it is.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构有些重复，且部分表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。
Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I really need and avoid unnecessary purchases, which saves money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，尤其是最后一句话不明所以。建议注意语法准确性，表达要清楚，避免无关或模糊的内容。
Example: Yes, I make work lists regularly, and they help me stay organized. I have been doing this since I was 18, and it feels great to complete all the tasks I planned.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，且结尾不完整。建议加强语法练习，使用连贯的句子，并完整表达观点。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because it requires effort and planning. Others may prefer to rely on their memory, believing they can manage tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议注意时态和语法，句子要完整，表达更清晰。
Example: I prefer making lists on paper and sticking them on my wall because I often forget to check my phone, so paper reminders are more effective for me.
Grammar
× I started making this and work at about 18 years old and I am happy when I can find that I accomplish all the tasks I list for the work.
✓ I started making this list and working at about 18 years old and I am happy when I can find that I accomplish all the tasks I list for the work.
句中“started making this and work”中“work”应使用动名词形式“working”，因为“start”后面接动名词表示开始做某事。这里是过去开始的动作，动词形式应保持一致。
× Speaking of making a list, I prefer to make lists on the paper and I stick it on my walls because if I making this on my phone, I would forgot to check my phone and so that's not effective I think.
✓ Speaking of making a list, I prefer to make lists on paper and I stick them on my walls because if I make this on my phone, I would forget to check my phone and so that's not effective I think.
句中“if I making this”应改为“if I make this”，因为“if”引导的条件句中动词应使用一般现在时。并且“forgot”应为“forget”，保持时态一致。此外，“on the paper”中“the”不必要，应为“on paper”。“stick it on my walls”中“it”应改为“them”，因为前面提到的是“lists”，复数形式。
× if I making this on my phone, I would forgot to check my phone
✓ if I make this on my phone, I would forget to check my phone
条件句中“making”应改为“make”，保持一般现在时；“forgot”应改为“forget”，保持时态一致。
× I prefer to make lists on the paper and I stick it on my walls
✓ I prefer to make lists on paper and I stick them on my walls
“on the paper”中“the”不必要，应为“on paper”；“stick it on my walls”中“it”应改为“them”，因为指的是复数“lists”。
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