List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like "catches in my eyes movement"; instead, say "catches my eye." Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse spontaneously. This way, I can discover new items that I might not have thought of otherwise.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some grammatical errors and missing articles. For example, say "listing tasks in order of priority" and "avoid forgetting important tasks." Also, use linking words like "for example" or "therefore" to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important tasks. Therefore, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

Suggestion: Your answer is too brief and unclear. Try to provide a complete sentence with specific reasons. For example, mention that some people find lists restrictive or prefer to rely on memory. Also, avoid using the word "habitat" incorrectly; "habits" or "preferences" would be better.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to rely on their memory or spontaneous decisions.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Avoid starting with "Yes" when the question asks for a preference between two options. Also, clarify your points and avoid unclear phrases like "reduces my time whenever I get in my mind." Try to give a clear reason and use linking words.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it anywhere and quickly add items whenever I think of them. This is more convenient than carrying paper lists.

× Instead I prefer to browse randomly and pick whatever catches in my eyes movement.

✓ Instead I prefer to browse randomly and pick whatever catches my eye.

The phrase 'catches in my eyes movement' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'catches my eye,' which means something attracts your attention. Also, 'eye' should be singular here because it is an idiomatic expression.

× For instance, by listing task in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important.

✓ For instance, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important things.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'forgetting important' is incomplete; it should be 'forgetting important things' to clarify what is being forgotten.

× Overall, making a list definitely improve my productivity.

✓ Overall, making a list definitely improves my productivity.

The verb 'improve' should be in the third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list.' This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Maybe depends upon specific person and their habitat.

✓ Maybe it depends on the specific person and their habits.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'it' clarifies the meaning. 'Depends upon' is less common than 'depends on.' Also, 'habitat' is incorrect in this context; 'habits' or 'environment' would be appropriate. Here, 'habits' fits better.

× Yes, I do prefer making list on my phone because I can carry it anywhere and wherever I like rather than carrying a paper and also it reduces my time whenever I get in my mind.

✓ Yes, I do prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it anywhere I like rather than carrying paper, and it also saves me time whenever I get an idea.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to indicate plural. 'Carrying a paper' is incorrect; 'carrying paper' or 'a piece of paper' is better. The phrase 'reduces my time whenever I get in my mind' is unclear; 'saves me time whenever I get an idea' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do prefer making list on my phone because I can carry it anywhere and wherever I like rather than carrying a paper and also it reduces my time whenever I get in my mind.

✓ Yes, I do prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it anywhere I like rather than carrying paper, and it also saves me time whenever I get an idea.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'making lists on my phone.' However, 'get in my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get an idea' or 'come to mind.' Also, 'carrying a paper' should be 'carrying paper' or 'a piece of paper.'