ListPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidate

Yes, I usually prepare a shopping list before I go shopping. It makes me easier for me to stay organised and avoid forgotten important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list helps me save time and buy only what I really need.

Examiner

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidate

Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete when opening and closing the restaurant. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. For example, I write down cleaning duties and inventory checks to make my job easier.

Examiner

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidate

I think some people don't like making leads because they feel it unnecessary. For example, one of my friends believes it's a waste of time since he can remember everything in his head, therefore he feels he doesn't need to write things down.

Examiner

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidate

Usually if I had a pen or paper beside me, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I was a student I always wrote a memory or make a list in class. So I get used to make a list on paper. It's more easier to write anything I want.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.0Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Score: 80.0

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子,但有语法错误和表达不够自然,如“makes me easier for me”应改为“makes it easier for me”。建议注意句子结构,避免重复词汇,使表达更流畅。

Example: Yes, I usually prepare a shopping list before I go shopping because it makes it easier for me to stay organized and avoid forgetting important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list helps me save time and buy only what I really need.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Score: 90.0

Suggestion: 你的回答结构清晰,内容具体,表达较自然。但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,如“because”和“for example”之间可以加上“so”。

Example: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete when opening and closing the restaurant. So, making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important. For example, I write down cleaning duties and inventory checks to make my job easier.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Score: 75.0

Suggestion: 回答中有拼写错误(leads应为lists)和语法错误(feel it unnecessary应为feel it is unnecessary)。建议注意单词拼写和句子完整性,同时使用连接词如“because”和“therefore”使逻辑更清晰。

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it is unnecessary. For example, one of my friends believes it's a waste of time since he can remember everything in his head; therefore, he feels he doesn't need to write things down.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Score: 70.0

Suggestion: 回答中时态使用不当(if I had应为if I have),表达不够自然,且有语法错误(more easier应为easier)。建议注意时态一致,避免重复表达,并使用正确的比较级形式。

Example: Usually, if I have a pen or paper beside me, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I was a student, I always wrote notes or made lists in class. So, I am used to making lists on paper. It's easier to write down anything I want this way.

Grammar

Verb + -ing form

× It makes me easier for me to stay organised and avoid forgotten important items.

It makes it easier for me to stay organised and avoid forgetting important items.

这里需要使用动名词形式"forgetting",因为动词"avoid"后面应接动名词,而不是过去分词"forgotten"。另外,"makes me easier"应改为"makes it easier",因为"make"后面需要有形式主语"it"。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It's more easier to write anything I want.

It's easier to write anything I want.

"more easier"是冗余表达,"easier"已经是比较级,不能再加"more"。应直接使用"easier"。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think some people don't like making leads because they feel it unnecessary.

I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it unnecessary.

这里"making leads"应为"making lists",因为题目和上下文都在谈论制作清单,"leads"用词错误。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× they feel it unnecessary.

they feel it is unnecessary.

"feel"后面需要有系动词"is"来连接表语,缺少"is"导致句子不完整。

Past tense issue

× Usually if I had a pen or paper beside me, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I was a student I always wrote a memory or make a list in class.

Usually if I have a pen or paper beside me, I prefer to make a list on paper because when I was a student I always wrote a memory or made a list in class.

条件句中表示习惯应使用一般现在时"have",而不是过去时"had"。另外,"make a list"应与前文时态一致,改为过去时"made a list"。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× So I get used to make a list on paper.

So I am used to making a list on paper.

"get used to"后应接动名词形式,故"make"应改为"making"。同时,表达习惯时常用被动形式"am used to"。

Vocabulary

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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