Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
No, I just shop freely because I have a difficulty in making a choice. So I don't make a.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Now I'm a student. I don't work, but I think if I work in the future, I will make a list because when I have to work, I must do things regularly. And it is.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Because some people they don't like to make plans and they may don't follow the plans so. They don't like to make.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make a list of my phone because, nowadays I have mobile phones with me and more convenient than making paper because paper, I couldn't take it everywhere.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不够完整且表达不够自然。建议在回答时直接回答问题,并用完整句子表达原因,避免语法错误和重复。
Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it hard to decide what to buy in advance.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中断且不完整,缺少连贯性。建议完整表达观点,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Example: I am currently a student, so I don't have a job yet. However, if I work in the future, I will definitely make lists because they help me organize tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误较多且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,明确表达原因,并避免重复。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and might not follow a fixed plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答较为清晰,但句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意语法和连贯性。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always with me and more convenient than carrying paper lists around.
× No, I just shop freely because I have a difficulty in making a choice. So I don't make a.
✓ No, I just shop freely because I have difficulty making a choice. So I don't make a list.
句子结构不完整,'I don't make a.'缺少宾语,导致句子不完整。应补充完整宾语'list',使句子完整通顺。
× Now I'm a student. I don't work, but I think if I work in the future, I will make a list because when I have to work, I must do things regularly. And it is.
✓ Now I'm a student. I don't work, but I think if I work in the future, I will make a list because when I have to work, I must do things regularly. And it is important.
句子末尾'And it is.'不完整,缺少表语,导致句子不完整。应补充完整表达,如'important',使句子完整。
× Because some people they don't like to make plans and they may don't follow the plans so. They don't like to make.
✓ Because some people don't like to make plans and they may not follow the plans, so they don't like to make lists.
句中'and they may don't'语法错误,应为'may not'。此外,句子断裂,缺少宾语'lists',且连接词使用不当,需调整句子结构使其通顺。
× I prefer to make a list of my phone because, nowadays I have mobile phones with me and more convenient than making paper because paper, I couldn't take it everywhere.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays I have my mobile phone with me and it's more convenient than using paper because I can't take paper everywhere.
介词使用错误,'make a list of my phone'应为'make a list on my phone'。此外,句子结构混乱,需调整表达使其更自然流畅。