List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'it is like linked with the things'.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I need to manage my budget carefully. For example, I plan how much money to spend on clothes and other items to avoid overspending.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer to the question and then explain with clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition such as 'daily plan daily'.

Example: I don't have a job, but as a student, I make daily study plans. This helps me focus and learn more effectively because I know exactly what tasks to complete each day.

Suggestion: Provide a clearer and more organised answer. Avoid vague phrases like 'and etcetera' and 'I don't have any idea'. Use linking words to explain reasons logically.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can manage tasks spontaneously. Additionally, they might lack motivation to plan ahead, which makes list-making seem unnecessary to them.

Suggestion: Clarify your preference clearly and organise your answer logically. Avoid repetition and vague expressions like 'for example every day here'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer writing lists on paper because it helps me remember my goals better. However, since I don't have a notebook, I usually use my phone to keep track of my daily plans.

× I all the time measure and plan the amount of money that I will spend And of course it is like linked with the things, the clothes.

✓ I always measure and plan the amount of money that I will spend, and of course it is linked with things like clothes.

The phrase 'I all the time' is incorrect; the correct adverbial phrase is 'I always'. Also, 'the things, the clothes' is awkward; it should be 'things like clothes' to indicate examples. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.

× I usually do, at least when I go for shopping because, uh, it depends on my money.

✓ I usually do, at least when I go shopping because, uh, it depends on my money.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'for'.

× I do a daily plan daily due to tasks and it really helps me to concentrate to my studies and learn productively.

✓ I make a daily plan of tasks and it really helps me to concentrate on my studies and learn productively.

The phrase 'due to tasks' is incorrect; 'of tasks' is appropriate to indicate the content of the plan. Also, 'concentrate to my studies' should be 'concentrate on my studies' because 'concentrate on' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I think because they think that everything will be good if they'll start without planning like or maybe they are not motivated enough to write their mind to write their plan and etcetera.

✓ I think it's because they believe everything will be fine if they start without planning, or maybe they are not motivated enough to write down their thoughts and plans, etc.

The phrase 'write their mind to write their plan' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'write down their thoughts and plans' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed. 'They'll' is better as 'they' for clarity in this context.

× Actually, I don't have any idea about that kind of people.

✓ Actually, I don't have any idea about those kinds of people.

The phrase 'that kind of people' is incorrect because 'kind' is singular and 'people' is plural. It should be 'those kinds of people' to match plural 'people' with plural 'kinds' and the demonstrative pronoun 'those'.

× Umm, in my point of view, it's better to write for example every day here that it's better to write your goals and dreams on on the paper.

✓ Umm, in my point of view, it's better to write, for example, every day here; it's better to write your goals and dreams on paper.

The phrase 'in my point of view' is better expressed as 'from my point of view' but as per instruction, only correcting listed grammar problems. The phrase 'on on the paper' has a repeated preposition; it should be 'on paper'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding commas and a semicolon improves clarity.

× It also effects to your daily plan.

✓ It also affects your daily plan.

The verb 'affect' does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'affects your daily plan'. Also, 'effects' is a noun; the verb form is 'affects'.

× However, I don't have any notebook, that's why my daily plan is written on my phone.

✓ However, I don't have a notebook, that's why my daily plan is written on my phone.

The phrase 'any notebook' is incorrect because 'notebook' is countable and singular; it should be 'a notebook'. 'Any' is generally used with plural or uncountable nouns.