Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. The reason is that I enjoy browsing different shops and discovering new items. For me, shopping is a form of retail therapy that helps me relax.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I always make a list for my job because it help me work efficient and complete. For example, when I have many things to do, the list ensure I don't forget anything.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think it depends on the different characters. For me my MBTI is INFJ person so I like to do some lists and for P person they don't like to be limited.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is very important for me in my daily life. I don't. I don't let my phone leave me over 1 metres.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 你的回答比较自然且内容相关,但可以更直接回答问题,并且避免重复表达。建议开头直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体原因支持,避免冗长。
Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse freely and discover new items, which makes shopping more enjoyable and relaxing for me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误,且表达不够流畅。建议注意动词形式和冠词使用,同时用连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me work efficiently and complete tasks on time. For example, when I have many things to do, the list ensures I don't forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰。建议用更通俗的语言解释原因,并且避免使用专业术语或解释清楚。
Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible, while others like me enjoy planning and organizing tasks in advance.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地说明原因,并避免重复。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's convenient to check and update my lists anytime.
× Yes, I always make a list for my job because it help me work efficient and complete.
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my job because it helps me work efficiently and completely.
主谓一致错误。主语是单数it,谓语动词应加-s变为helps。此外,形容词efficient和complete应改为副词efficiently和completely来修饰动词work。
× For example, when I have many things to do, the list ensure I don't forget anything.
✓ For example, when I have many things to do, the list ensures I don't forget anything.
主谓一致错误。主语the list是单数,谓语动词应加-s变为ensures。
× For me my MBTI is INFJ person so I like to do some lists and for P person they don't like to be limited.
✓ For me, my MBTI is INFJ, so I like to make some lists, but P types don't like to be limited.
句子结构错误。缺少逗号分隔,表达不清晰。'do some lists'应改为'make some lists',连接词应使用but表示转折。
× I don't. I don't let my phone leave me over 1 metres.
✓ I don't. I don't let my phone leave me for over 1 meter.
句子结构错误。'leave me over 1 metres'表达不准确,应加介词for表示时间长度,且meter应为单数。