Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because I think making a list can be a very convenient and effective way to help me remember everything I need. By doing this, I seldom forget the.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
I'm always willing to make a list of my job because it is a very good way to help me organize the things I have to do every day and feel more confident.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Well, I think not everyone needs a list because some of people they have a very good memory so they can handle everything they need to do or everything they have to buy.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Well, I'd like to say I prefer making A to do list on my phone because I always take my phone with me and using apps can be a very convenient way to find what I should do directly and apparently.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构有些重复且结尾不完整,建议避免冗余并完整表达意思。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式,并补充具体细节。
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. This way, I rarely forget anything important and can shop more efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中表达了观点,但句子有些生硬,且缺少连接词使内容不够连贯。建议使用连接词丰富句子,并具体说明列清单如何帮助你。
Example: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my daily tasks clearly. As a result, I feel more confident and can manage my time better.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复,建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅,并具体说明原因。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because they have excellent memories and can remember their tasks or shopping items without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,建议注意冠词使用和词汇搭配,同时用连接词使句子更自然。
Example: I prefer making to-do lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Using apps is very convenient since I can easily check my tasks anytime and stay organized.
× By doing this, I seldom forget the.
✓ By doing this, I seldom forget them.
这里的'the'是错误的用法,应该用'them'来指代前面提到的复数物品。'them'是复数宾格代词,表示'它们'。
× some of people they have a very good memory so they can handle everything they need to do or everything they have to buy.
✓ some people have a very good memory so they can handle everything they need to do or everything they have to buy.
'some of people'是不正确的表达,应该直接用'some people'表示'一些人'。另外,'some of'后面通常接特定的复数名词或代词。句中多余的代词'they'也应去掉。
× Well, I'd like to say I prefer making A to do list on my phone because I always take my phone with me and using apps can be a very convenient way to find what I should do directly and apparently.
✓ Well, I'd like to say I prefer making a to-do list on my phone because I always take my phone with me and using apps can be a very convenient way to find what I should do directly and apparently.
'A to do list'中的'A'应为小写'a',且'to do list'应连字符连接为'to-do list',表示'待办事项清单'。大写'A'不符合英语冠词用法。