List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding hesitations and repetitions. Also, use a clear topic sentence and add a linking phrase to support your answer logically. For example, you can say why making a list helps you specifically.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy, which saves me time and prevents me from forgetting anything.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain how making lists helps you at work. Try to be concise and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me keep track of completed tasks and plan what I need to do next, which improves my punctuality and productivity.

Suggestion: Work on clarity and grammar to express your opinion more naturally. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Try to give specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Example: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things mentally rather than writing them down.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using more natural expressions and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repetition and use precise vocabulary to explain your preference.

Example: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me, so I can easily check my list while shopping.

× Yes, most of the time I list uh when I when I want to go shopping, it is easy to remember things what what I need to buy.

✓ Yes, most of the time I make a list when I want to go shopping; it is easy to remember the things I need to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'list' as a verb without the appropriate form. The verb 'make' is commonly used with 'a list'. Also, 'things what what I need to buy' is incorrect; 'the things I need to buy' is the correct phrase. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Of course I'm a very punctual person. I make a list when I was work where I need to remember what I did and what I need to do more so it is a good way to Remember Me. So I also usually make a list.

✓ Of course, I'm a very punctual person. I make a list when I work because I need to remember what I did and what I need to do more; so it is a good way to remind me. So I usually make a list.

The phrase 'when I was work' is incorrect; 'when I work' is appropriate for present tense. 'Remember Me' should be 'remind me' to convey the intended meaning. The sentence is corrected to maintain present tense consistency and proper verb usage.

× In my according to my opinion, most of the pupils do not like to write more words like making lists.

✓ According to my opinion, most pupils do not like to write many words like making lists.

The phrase 'In my according to my opinion' is redundant and incorrect; 'According to my opinion' suffices. Also, 'more words' is vague; 'many words' is more appropriate when referring to quantity. This correction improves prepositional and quantifier usage.

× They have because they have a sharp memory and they can easily remember anything what we what they need to buy.

✓ They have a sharp memory and can easily remember anything they need to buy.

The phrase 'anything what we what they need to buy' is incorrect and confusing. The correct relative pronoun is 'that' or omitted in informal speech; here, 'anything they need to buy' is clear and grammatically correct.

× So they can cannot prefer to make a list.

✓ So they cannot prefer to make a list.

The phrase 'can cannot' is a double modal verb usage, which is incorrect. Only one modal verb should be used; 'cannot' alone is sufficient to express inability or preference.

× Most of the time I prefer to make a list in my cell phone because it is easy to carry.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to make a list on my cell phone because it is easy to carry.

The correct preposition when referring to devices like phones is 'on' rather than 'in'. 'On my cell phone' indicates using the device as a platform for the list.

× So I saw my list in my phone and I can easily buy all things which I need and which I wrote in the list.

✓ So I see my list on my phone and can easily buy all the things I need and have written in the list.

'Saw' is past tense, inconsistent with present context; 'see' is correct. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'All things which I need and which I wrote' is awkward; 'all the things I need and have written' is clearer and grammatically correct.