List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy such as repeating the reason for making a list. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'Apart from that', you could say 'Moreover' or 'Additionally'.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I tend to forget items easily. Moreover, it helps me stick to my budget and prevents me from buying unnecessary things. I usually use a digital app to keep my list organized.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question well but can be improved by using better linking words and avoiding short, choppy sentences. Also, be careful with grammar, for example, say 'I make lists' instead of 'I make list'.

Example: Although I am not currently working, I make lists for my studies because they help me stay organised and focused. In addition, I use apps that assist me by reminding me of my daily activities, which keeps me on track.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but the sentence structure is confusing and some phrases are unclear, such as 'die straight into their task'. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. They are confident in their memory and prefer to start their tasks immediately rather than spending time writing a list.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition such as 'as well' twice in the last sentence. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, 'apps that constantly remind' instead of 'reminds'. Use linking words like 'furthermore' to enhance coherence.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me and more convenient. Furthermore, digital apps remind me of my daily tasks, allow me to share lists with others, and let me easily edit and rearrange activities.

× Although I'm not working currently, I make list for my studies.

✓ Although I'm not working currently, I make lists for my studies.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of lists made for studies, indicating more than one list is involved.

× It helps me to assist and remind about my daily activities.

✓ It helps me to assist and remind me about my daily activities.

The verb 'remind' requires an object, so 'me' should be included after 'remind' to specify who is being reminded.

× According to my perspective of individuals perceive making a list is a time consuming process and they feel confident in the ability to remember things, so they do not feel the need to write everything down without a second thought.

✓ According to my perspective, individuals perceive making a list as a time-consuming process and feel confident in their ability to remember things, so they do not feel the need to write everything down without a second thought.

The original sentence has structural issues: 'According to my perspective of individuals perceive' is incorrect. It should be 'According to my perspective, individuals perceive'. Also, 'making a list is a time consuming process' should be 'making a list as a time-consuming process'. Additionally, 'confident in the ability' should be 'confident in their ability' for clarity and correctness.

× They prefer to die straight into their task instead of making a list.

✓ They prefer to dive straight into their task instead of making a list.

The word 'die' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'dive' meaning to jump or plunge into something. This is a prepositional and word choice error.

× In addition, I use digital apps that constantly reminds me about my daily tasks and I can share my list with multiple people as well.

✓ In addition, I use digital apps that constantly remind me about my daily tasks and I can share my list with multiple people as well.

The subject 'apps' is plural, so the verb should be 'remind' instead of 'reminds' to agree in number.