List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I want to shopping'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Example: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to choose items spontaneously. However, sometimes I make a list to avoid forgetting important things.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'I have make' nên là 'I make' hoặc 'I have made'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work. At first, I thought they wouldn't help, but actually, they help me organize tasks more clearly and work more efficiently.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể và rõ ràng hơn cho quan điểm của bạn.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to shop freely without restrictions. They enjoy choosing items spontaneously and managing their own budget.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'I prefer make' nên là 'I prefer to make'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and portable. I can access my list anytime and anywhere without carrying extra paper.

× I want to shopping and I want to buy everything on my own, so I don't want to make a list.

✓ I want to shop and I want to buy everything on my own, so I don't want to make a list.

The verb 'want to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'shopping' should be corrected to 'shop'.

× Uh, I have make a list for my work.

✓ Uh, I have made a list for my work.

The auxiliary verb 'have' should be followed by the past participle form of the main verb. 'Make' should be changed to 'made' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× Firstly I think is isn't work, but it's work.

✓ Firstly, I think it doesn't work, but it does work.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. 'Isn't work' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't work' to express negation in present tense. Also, 'it' is needed as the subject.

× It's help me do everything more comfortable and more clearly.

✓ It helps me do everything more comfortably and more clearly.

The subject 'It' requires the verb in third person singular form 'helps'. Also, 'comfortable' should be the adverb 'comfortably' to modify the verb 'do'.

× some people don't like making this because they want to shopping on their own, they want to buy everything they want and they want to decided the price and the cost of the things that they want.

✓ some people don't like making lists because they want to shop on their own, they want to buy everything they want and they want to decide the price and the cost of the things that they want.

'Want to' should be followed by the base verb form, so 'shopping' should be 'shop' and 'decided' should be 'decide'. Also, 'making this' is unclear; 'making lists' is more appropriate.

× I prefer make a list on my phones because when making a list on my phone, I feel it is more convenient and more com comfortable the phones in a small digital device that I can bring it to Everything Everywhere in the world.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because when making a list on my phone, I feel it is more convenient and more comfortable. The phone is a small digital device that I can bring everywhere in the world.

'Prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb, so 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' to match the context. 'Com comfortable' is a typo and should be 'comfortable'. The sentence was run-on and needed to be split for clarity.