ListPart 1 Report

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Conversation

Part 1

Examiner

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidate

No, I don't like to make a list. I prefer remember something when I need to buy something like food or some electronic devices.

Examiner

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidate

Yes, I do. I think it's quite useful for me. I can remember what I need to do next and if I finish the last job, I can choose which job I can do next.

Examiner

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidate

You need to do lots of things to make a list. Some people may think it's not useful for them. They prefer using their own mind and choose which job they can do next. They like do things readily, not one by one.

Examiner

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidate

I'm near making Nest in my smart. If I bring a book with me, I might not remember it, you know, forget it. But if I make a list in my smartphone, I can check it whenever I want to do it.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.0Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够自然,且缺少连贯性。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember the items I need, such as food or electronic devices, as I go along.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Score: 75.0

Suggestion: 回答结构较好,但句子重复,缺少多样词汇和连接词。建议丰富词汇,避免重复,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, I do make lists for my work because they help me remember my tasks. Once I finish one job, I can easily decide which task to tackle next.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: 表达不够准确,语法错误较多,且缺少连贯性。建议注意语法,使用更准确的表达,并用连接词连接句子。

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Instead, they prefer to rely on their memory and handle tasks spontaneously rather than following a strict order.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: 回答中有明显语法和表达错误,影响理解。建议使用简单清晰的句子,避免错误,并且逻辑更清楚。

Example: I prefer making lists on my smartphone because I can check them anytime. If I use a paper notebook, I might forget to bring it with me.

Grammar

Verb + -ing form

× I prefer remember something when I need to buy something like food or some electronic devices.

I prefer remembering something when I need to buy something like food or some electronic devices.

动词prefer后面应接动名词形式,不能直接接动词原形。这里remember应改为remembering。

Verb + -ing form

× They like do things readily, not one by one.

They like doing things readily, not one by one.

动词like后面应接动名词形式,不能直接接动词原形。这里do应改为doing。

Sentence structure errors

× I'm near making Nest in my smart.

I'm used to making notes on my smartphone.

原句结构混乱,表达不清。应使用固定表达“be used to doing sth.”表示习惯做某事,并且单词拼写错误,Nest应为notes,smart应为smartphone。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If I bring a book with me, I might not remember it, you know, forget it.

If I bring a book with me, I might not remember to bring it, you know, might forget it.

原句中it指代不明确,且forget用法不当。应明确表达忘记带书的意思,使用remember to bring it和might forget it更合适。

Vocabulary

UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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