List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性，避免冗余，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. I just remember the main items I need and sometimes pick up a few extra things that catch my eye.

Suggestion: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议分句表达，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

Example: Yes, I do make lists for my work. Since I majored in architecture design, I often have many drawings to complete. I list tasks like effects, reviews, and sections, which helps me stay organized and work efficiently.

Suggestion: 回答较为清晰，但有重复词汇和语法错误。建议注意句子简洁，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

Example: Some people prefer not to make lists because they can remember their tasks well. Also, they might find it inconvenient to find paper and pen quickly, so they avoid making lists.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式说明理由。

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I have a poor memory. Using my phone is more convenient than paper, as I can easily check my tasks anytime.

× No, I never make a list and when I was shopping I remember several things I must to buy and also I random and take some more goods in my cart which I just want them.

✓ No, I never make a list and when I was shopping I remember several things I must buy and also I randomly take some more goods in my cart which I just want.

“must to buy”中的“to”是不正确的，情态动词must后面直接接动词原形，不能加to。建议去掉“to”。另外，“random”应为副词“randomly”，修饰动词“take”。

× Yes, as I majored in architecture design and we all always have so many pictures to do and I always make a list of what pictures I should do such as effects or reviews or some sections and it really work well.

✓ Yes, as I majored in architecture design and we all always have so many pictures to do and I always make a list of what pictures I should do such as effects or reviews or some sections and it really works well.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“work”应加-s变为“works”，以保持主谓一致。

× Some people can remember the things they should do well, and maybe they think they they can't find the proper paper and pen in a short time, so they don't want to make a list.

✓ Some people can remember the things they should do well, and maybe they think they can't find the proper paper and pen in a short time, so they don't want to make a list.

句中“they they”重复，应删除一个“they”。这是代词重复使用错误。

× Uh, yes, I like to make a list on my phone because I have a poor memorization and makes a list on my phone is more convenient and it can help me find the things I should do when in a paper. It's not convenient.

✓ Uh, yes, I like to make a list on my phone because I have poor memorization and making a list on my phone is more convenient and it can help me find the things I should do. Using paper is not convenient.

主语“I”后面的谓语动词“makes”应改为“making”作为动名词短语，且“a poor memorization”中“memorization”不可数，前面不加冠词“a”。另外，“when in a paper”表达不清，改为“Using paper is not convenient”更通顺。