List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like "for like the shop" which are unclear. Try to directly state your habit and its benefit, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time. By writing down what I need, I can shop efficiently and avoid forgetting items.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. For example, instead of "far better," use "much better." Also, connect your ideas with words like "so" or "which helps."

Example: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for work, which helps me stay organized. This way, I don't have to waste time deciding what to do next, so my productivity improves significantly.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear. Use linking words like "because" or "perhaps" to explain reasons logically. Also, avoid repeating phrases like "for me, as far as I am concerned."

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they are very busy or have excellent memory, so they don't feel the need to write things down.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid repeating "because" multiple times. Use linking words like "since" or "as" to connect ideas. Also, correct small errors like "forgot it my home" to "forgot it at home."

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone since it's more convenient. I used to write on paper, but I often forgot the list at home, which made it harder to manage.

× their memory are is so strong that they don't need to be involved in such task and some people I believe.

✓ their memory is so strong that they don't need to be involved in such tasks, I believe.

The subject 'memory' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. The phrase 'some people I believe' is better placed at the end for clarity.

× I usually write down what I need for like the shop, and then it's easy and far convenient for me to do within the time limit.

✓ I usually write down what I need for the shop, and then it's easy and much more convenient for me to do within the time limit.

The phrase 'for like the shop' is incorrect; 'for the shop' is appropriate. Also, 'far convenient' is not idiomatic; 'much more convenient' is the correct comparative form.

× sometimes I forgot it my home and it is difficult to manage it on paper and other than like phone.

✓ sometimes I forget it at home and it is difficult to manage it on paper rather than on my phone.

The preposition 'at' is used with 'home' to indicate location. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense. The phrase 'other than like phone' is incorrect; 'rather than on my phone' is the correct expression.

× sometimes I forgot it my home and it is difficult to manage it on paper and other than like phone.

✓ sometimes I forget it at home and it is difficult to manage it on paper rather than on my phone.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient for me because I used to write on papers before it and sometimes I forgot it my home and it is difficult to manage it on paper and other than like phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient for me. I used to write on paper before, but sometimes I forgot it at home, and it is difficult to manage on paper compared to my phone.

The pronoun 'it' is used ambiguously. 'Write on papers' should be 'write on paper'. The sentence is long and confusing; splitting it improves clarity. 'Forgot it my home' is missing preposition 'at'. 'Other than like phone' is incorrect; 'compared to my phone' is better.