List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy. If I forget something, I check the list and buy the remaining items from another store. This method is very convenient and saves me time.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repetition.

Example: I don't usually make a list for my work because I find it difficult to follow. Although I have tried planning my tasks the night before, it didn't suit me, so I stopped doing it.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but some words are incorrect and sentences are a bit awkward. Use correct vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to contrast ideas effectively.

Example: Some people, like me, don't like to be restricted by lists because they prefer to be flexible and do tasks as they come to mind. However, others who make lists are usually well organized and follow their plans strictly.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy and convenient. Since we always carry our phones, I don't need to look for pen and paper, which saves time and effort.

× Making making list on phone is quite easy and there is no need to find a pen and a paper to list down the things so and we always have our phones with us so it's very convenient to make list on phone rather than using pen and paper.

✓ Making a list on the phone is quite easy and there is no need to find a pen and paper to list down the things, and we always have our phones with us, so it's very convenient to make a list on the phone rather than using pen and paper.

The phrase 'Making making list' contains a repetition error and lacks the article 'a' before 'list'. The gerund 'Making' should be followed by the article 'a' to correctly form the noun phrase 'Making a list'. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on the phone' to specify the device. Adding commas improves sentence clarity and flow.

× Some people like me, don't like to be flecked.

✓ Some people like me don't like to be flecked.

The phrase 'Some people like me, don't like' has an unnecessary comma that interrupts the subject. Removing the comma correctly connects the subject and verb. However, the word 'flecked' seems to be a mispronunciation or misuse; likely the intended word is 'flexed' or 'flexible'. Since 'flecked' is not a grammar issue per se, it is not corrected here.

× And another ones that do make list, they are very well organized and they just do whatever they plan the night before.

✓ And others who do make lists are very well organized and they just do whatever they planned the night before.

The phrase 'another ones' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns, while 'ones' is plural. It should be 'others'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' to agree in number. The verb 'plan' should be in past tense 'planned' to match the context of 'the night before'.

× Whenever I just forget anything, I'll just see that list and I'll check down whatever I buy and the remaining stuff it's it's not in the mall.

✓ Whenever I forget anything, I'll just see that list and I'll check off whatever I buy, and for the remaining stuff that's not in the mall,

The phrase 'check down' is incorrect; the correct phrasal verb is 'check off' when marking items on a list. Also, 'it's it's' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'that's'. The sentence is long and can be better structured for clarity.

× Actually I don't make a list for my work, but I know that I know one way to plan a day like the night before we can make a list but we have to do the next day and on that day one can do all those things.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list for my work, but I know one way to plan a day: like the night before, we can make a list of what we have to do the next day, and on that day, one can do all those things.

The phrase 'I know that I know one way' is redundant; removing the extra 'I know' improves clarity. Also, the sentence lacks punctuation and has awkward phrasing. Adding commas and rephrasing improves readability. The pronoun usage is corrected for clarity.