List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn.

Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. I find it more enjoyable to choose items based on my current needs and mood.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đúng để thể hiện ý tưởng.

Example: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because I have many tasks to complete each day. As a homeroom and math teacher, the list helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and want to complete tasks based on their feelings. They find lists too restrictive and prefer to decide what to do spontaneously.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I tend to forget things easily. My phone can remind me on time, which helps me stay organized.

× Actually I don't. I never leave when I I stop because I think it's so waste of time.

✓ Actually I don't. I never leave when I stop because I think it's such a waste of time.

The phrase 'so waste of time' is incorrect; it should be 'such a waste of time' to properly express the idea. 'Such' is used with a noun phrase to emphasize the degree, and the article 'a' is necessary before 'waste'.

× I just want to go around and buy anything I want because it's the because I need it.

✓ I just want to go around and buy anything I want because I need it.

The phrase 'because it's the because I need it' is redundant and confusing. Removing 'it's the because' clarifies the sentence and corrects the quantifier usage.

× Yes, when I walk I always delete anything I want to do a special day because I have so many things to do in a day.

✓ Yes, when I work I always delete anything I want to do on a special day because I have so many things to do in a day.

The word 'walk' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'work'. Also, the preposition 'on' is needed before 'a special day' to indicate time.

× Beside I am a homeroom teacher, I am a mathematic teacher and I have to complete anything in our thing in a day.

✓ Besides, I am a homeroom teacher, I am a math teacher and I have to complete everything in our work in a day.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. 'Mathematic teacher' should be 'math teacher'. 'Anything' is replaced with 'everything' to indicate all tasks. 'Our thing' is unclear and replaced with 'our work' for clarity.

× Some people want to clearly want to be clearly when they walk and they want to arrange anything you want to do.

✓ Some people clearly want to be clear when they work and they want to arrange everything they want to do.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect pronouns. 'Want to clearly want to be clearly' is corrected to 'clearly want to be clear'. 'Walk' is corrected to 'work'. 'Anything you want' is corrected to 'everything they want' to maintain pronoun agreement.

× But some of us don't want to make a list because they want to depend on feeling and they want to complete the task whenever.

✓ But some of us don't want to make a list because we want to depend on feeling and want to complete the task whenever.

The pronoun 'they' is inconsistent with 'some of us'. It should be 'we' to maintain first person plural. Also, 'depend on feeling' is acceptable but could be improved by adding 'our' before 'feeling' for clarity.

× I prefer make a list on my phone to in the paper because I am a shock memorable person so I don't remember all the things I write down in the paper and the phone can remind me on time.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I have a poor memory so I don't remember all the things I write down on paper and the phone can remind me on time.

'Prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. 'To in the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'rather than on paper'. 'Shock memorable person' is incorrect and replaced with 'have a poor memory'. Prepositions 'on the paper' corrected to 'on paper'.