List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答较为自然，但句子结构和表达略显简单，且有些语法错误，如"it's a kind of relaxing"应为"it's kind of relaxing"。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免重复。

Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find wandering around the supermarket quite relaxing. Making a list sometimes makes me feel rushed and nervous about what to buy.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如"helped me make sure that what I should do"不够准确。建议使用更完整和连贯的句子，并适当使用连接词。

Example: Actually, I have tried making a list for my work, and it works well because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively.

Suggestion: 回答中有较多语法和重复错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel nervous and distracted, causing them to focus too much on deadlines instead of the tasks themselves.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如"will make me will make me checking"。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子流畅性。

Example: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because paper lists are always visible, and using my phone might distract me with notifications.

× I think it's a kind of relaxing.

✓ I think it's kind of relaxing.

这里的'relaxing'是形容词，前面不需要冠词'a'，因为'relaxing'表示一种状态，应该用'kind of relaxing'表示'有点放松'的意思。

× Actually I tried to make a list for my work. I think it worked because it helped me make sure that what I should do and when I should do.

✓ Actually I tried to make a list for my work. I think it worked because it helped me make sure what I should do and when I should do it.

句子中缺少宾语，'when I should do'后面需要加上宾语'it'，否则句子不完整。

× I think making a list sometimes will makes make somebody nervous and as as a result they can't even focus on the tasks and kept seeking keep keep thinking the deadline.

✓ I think making a list sometimes will make somebody nervous and as a result they can't even focus on the tasks and keep thinking about the deadline.

'will'后面动词应为原形，不能用'makes'或'make'。另外，'kept seeking keep keep thinking'重复且错误，应改为'keep thinking about'。

× I think making a list sometimes will makes make somebody nervous and as as a result they can't even focus on the tasks and kept seeking keep keep thinking the deadline.

✓ I think making a list sometimes will make somebody nervous and as a result they can't even focus on the tasks and keep thinking about the deadline.

'think'后面需要介词'about'来引出宾语，'thinking the deadline'应改为'thinking about the deadline'。

× I prefer to make a list on paper than on my phone because I think making a list on paper can make it visible, which is better than phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because I think making a list on paper can make it visible, which is better than on the phone.

比较结构中应使用'rather than'而非'than'，且比较对象前应加介词'on'，即'on the phone'。

× What's more, making a list on the phone will make me will make me checking out my phone sometimes.

✓ What's more, making a list on the phone will make me check my phone sometimes.

句子中'will make me'重复，且'checking'应改为动词原形'check'，因为'make'后接动词原形。