List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use simpler, more natural expressions. Also, limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list. It helps me prioritize what I need to buy based on my budget. I would recommend others to do the same to avoid unnecessary spending.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats phrases and is a bit confusing. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and clarify your points for better coherence.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me focus on the most important tasks. For example, I prioritize tasks based on their urgency and impact, which improves my productivity.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to shop spontaneously. However, without a list, they might buy unnecessary items and spend more money.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors. Try to give a clear preference with reasons, use linking words, and avoid fragmented sentences. Keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: I prefer writing my shopping list on paper because it's more convenient and I don't have to worry about my phone running out of battery or getting distracted by notifications.

× So I would advise other to do the same.

✓ So I would advise others to do the same.

The word 'other' should be plural 'others' to correctly refer to multiple people. Using 'others' is appropriate when advising more than one person.

× Because I'd write out my my shopping list according to the percentage, the higher their cost percentage.

✓ Because I write out my shopping list according to the percentage, the higher the cost percentage.

The phrase 'I'd write out' is incorrect here because the speaker is describing a habitual action, so present tense 'I write out' is appropriate. Also, 'their' is incorrect when referring to 'percentage'; 'the' should be used instead.

× It risk me getting to know people don't because why won't you?

✓ It risks me getting to know why people don't.

The verb 'risk' needs to be in third person singular form 'risks' to agree with the subject 'It'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; rephrasing clarifies the meaning.

× If you if you go out without a shopping list, you will end up spending buying what are not necessary for you.

✓ If you go out without a shopping list, you will end up buying things that are not necessary for you.

The phrase 'spending buying' is redundant; 'buying' alone suffices. Also, 'what are not necessary' should be 'things that are not necessary' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer making my lists, writing out my list on a paper.

✓ I prefer making my lists, writing out my list on paper.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'paper' when referring to the material in general. The correct phrase is 'on paper'.

× It's more convenient and less tackle.

✓ It's more convenient and less of a hassle.

The word 'tackle' is incorrectly used here; the intended meaning is likely 'hassle' or 'trouble'. Also, 'less tackle' is not grammatically correct.

× Because it annoys. It ricks me you it will risk me if my phone goes off during shopping.

✓ Because it annoys me. It risks me if my phone goes off during shopping.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear pronoun usage. 'It annoys me' is correct. 'It risks me' is awkward; better phrasing would be 'It poses a risk if my phone goes off during shopping.' However, following instructions, only correcting grammar issues, the correction is as above.