List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as subject-verb agreement and article usage.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items and saves time.

Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and check verb forms and word order.

Example: Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work or study plan, especially on busy days when I have many tasks to complete on time. Making a list helps me stay organized and manage my time better.

Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments and provide more specific reasons. Use linking words to explain cause and effect clearly.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because seeing a long list can make them feel overwhelmed and unmotivated to start their tasks.

Suggestion: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and articles. Add linking words to explain reasons more clearly and provide more details.

Example: I prefer to make my list on paper because it helps me organize my work better and I find it easier to focus without digital distractions.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go to the go to the shop because it help me to remember the important items and this way to spend my time.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go to the shop because it helps me to remember the important items and this way I spend my time.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the phrase 'this way to spend my time' is incomplete and unclear; it should be corrected to 'this way I spend my time' to make a complete and clear sentence.

× Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work or my study plan especially when I have a busy day and it I have so many tasks that should I completed on time. So I make a list and it then.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work or my study plan especially when I have a busy day and I have so many tasks that I should complete on time. So I make a list and use it then.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words like 'it I' and incorrect word order 'should I completed'. The correct structure is 'I have so many tasks that I should complete on time'. Also, 'So I make a list and it then' is incomplete; it should be 'So I make a list and use it then' to clarify the meaning.

× Some people dislike making a list because when they see the list, they feel. They are too lazy to do anything.

✓ Some people dislike making a list because when they see the list, they feel lazy and are too lazy to do anything.

The sentence 'they feel.' is incomplete and causes a sentence fragment. It should be combined with the next sentence to form a complete thought: 'they feel lazy and are too lazy to do anything.'

× I have so many tasks that should I completed on time.

✓ I have so many tasks that I should complete on time.

The modal verb 'should' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'complete', not the past participle 'completed'. The correct structure is 'should complete'.

× I prefer make my list on the paper because it help me to organize my work.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because it helps me to organize my work.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'on the paper' is better expressed as 'on paper'.