List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'what I want to show' instead of 'what I want to shop' or 'buy'. Also, the sentence is a bit long and redundant. Try to make your answer more concise and clear, directly addressing the question with a topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. For example, without a list, I might forget essential items like milk or bread.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid negative phrases like 'I do procrastinate a lot' without elaboration. Keep your answer concise and structured.

Example: Yes, I make a daily to-do list to organise my tasks. Although I sometimes procrastinate, having a list helps me stay focused and complete most of my work.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and is a bit fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Example: I believe some people dislike making lists because they are not used to it. For instance, some prefer to rely on their memory, which works well for them.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid filler phrases like 'you know'. Also, explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because I have been doing it for a long time. Moreover, I find it more convenient and easier to review than using my smartphone.

× Yes, I often make a list of what I want to show.

✓ Yes, I often make a list of what I want to shop.

The word 'show' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is to list items to buy, so 'shop' is the correct verb here.

× Otherwise it's difficult to or remember everything that you are supposed to shop and writing the list of all the things you want to purchase or you're supposed to buy helps you to not.

✓ Otherwise, it's difficult to remember everything that you are supposed to buy, and writing a list of all the things you want to purchase helps you not to forget.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains misplaced words like 'or' and lacks clarity. The corrected sentence improves structure and clarity by properly connecting ideas and correcting verb usage.

× Yes, I do make a list of what I'm supposed to achieve each day, even though I don't achieve everything from my To Do List.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of what I'm supposed to achieve each day, even though I don't complete everything on my To Do List.

The verb 'achieve' is better replaced with 'complete' when referring to tasks on a list, as 'achieve' is more abstract and less commonly used for daily tasks.

× I do procrastinate a lot of things, but I do make a list of all the things that I'm supposed to do every day.

✓ I do procrastinate on a lot of things, but I do make a list of all the things that I'm supposed to do every day.

The verb 'procrastinate' is usually followed by the preposition 'on' when referring to delaying tasks.

× I don't think that most people don't like making things, it's just that they are not in that habit of making lists.

✓ I don't think that most people dislike making lists; it's just that they are not in the habit of making them.

The phrase 'making things' is vague and incorrect; 'making lists' is the intended meaning. Also, the double negative 'don't think that most people don't like' is confusing and corrected for clarity.

× So it's nothing. There is nothing to be dislike about making list.

✓ So it's nothing. There is nothing to dislike about making lists.

The phrase 'to be dislike' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to dislike'. Also, 'making list' should be plural 'making lists' for generalization.

× It's just a personality. Different people.

✓ It's just a matter of personality; different people are different.

The original sentences are fragments and lack clarity. The correction combines them into a coherent sentence.

× Some people remember things without making a list.

✓ Some people remember things without making lists.

When speaking generally, 'lists' plural is more appropriate to indicate the habit of making lists in general.

× I'd like to make a list on paper because I'm doing it for a long time, even when phones and laptops are that common.

✓ I'd like to make a list on paper because I've been doing it for a long time, even though phones and laptops are so common.

The phrase 'I'm doing it for a long time' is incorrect; present perfect 'I've been doing' is appropriate. Also, 'that common' should be 'so common' and 'even when' should be 'even though' for correct meaning.

× So I'm continuing that same patterns, you know, because I find it more convenient as compared to writing everything on my smartphone.

✓ So I'm continuing the same pattern, you know, because I find it more convenient compared to writing everything on my smartphone.

The phrase 'that same patterns' is incorrect; 'the same pattern' is singular and correct here. Also, 'as compared to' can be simplified to 'compared to'.