List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh' and 'like'. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items easily. Therefore, preparing a list helps me remember everything I need and shop efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but contains many filler words and repetitions. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating the same words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. I schedule tasks with specific time allocations, which helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete.

Example: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything. They prefer to organise tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but includes unnecessary filler words and a confusing phrase ('I California'). Try to speak clearly and avoid irrelevant words. Use linking words to connect your reasons logically.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me, allowing me to check my tasks anytime. In contrast, paper lists can be easily misplaced.

× I have a habit of like skipping things from my mind, uh, whenever.

✓ I have a habit of skipping things from my mind, uh, whenever.

The phrase 'of like skipping' is incorrect because 'like' is unnecessary here and disrupts the correct use of the gerund 'skipping' after 'habit of'. Removing 'like' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I make a list of the things I want to buy to, to make everything perfect and.

✓ I make a list of the things I want to buy to make everything perfect.

The phrase 'to, to make everything perfect and.' is incomplete and contains an unnecessary comma and conjunction 'and'. Removing the extra 'to' and 'and' and completing the sentence properly corrects the preposition and sentence structure.

× I make a list for everything in a in a day and do according to that schedule.

✓ I make a list for everything in a day and follow that schedule accordingly.

The phrase 'in a in a day' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'do according to that schedule' is awkward; 'follow that schedule accordingly' is more appropriate. Correcting the preposition and verb usage improves clarity.

× According to me, some people they don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary to make list as they think they can remember everything they can.

✓ According to me, some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary to make a list as they think they can remember everything.

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'some people they' and missing article 'a' before 'list'. Removing the redundant pronoun and adding the article corrects the sentence.

× They the thing that they have organized everything according to in the mind so they can do whatever.

✓ They think that they have organized everything in their mind so they can do whatever.

The phrase 'They the thing that' is incorrect; it should be 'They think that'. Also, 'according to in the mind' is awkward; 'in their mind' is correct. Correcting pronoun use and preposition improves the sentence.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because uh, I California, uh, because my phone is every time with me, so I can check what list I had made and what I need to do.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me, so I can check the list I have made and what I need to do.

The phrase 'I California, uh,' is irrelevant and should be removed. 'Every time with me' is incorrect; 'always with me' is correct. Also, 'what list I had made' should be 'the list I have made' to match present perfect tense. Correcting prepositions and verb tense improves clarity.

× So I prefer to make a list on phone.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing the possessive pronoun 'my'. Adding 'my' makes the sentence grammatically correct.