List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 명확하게 하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I make a list to avoid overspending and to buy only what I need.'처럼 간결하고 명확한 문장을 사용하세요.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money.

Suggestion: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 현재 시제와 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 'my thing' 같은 모호한 표현 대신 구체적인 단어를 사용하세요. 예를 들어, 'I always make a study plan because it helps me organize my assignments and feel more comfortable.'

Example: Yes, I always make a study plan because it helps me organize my assignments and study more effectively.

Suggestion: 답변이 중복되고 명확하지 않습니다. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하고, 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 말하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured, and it depends on their personality.'

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they feel pressured by strict plans, and it depends on their personality.

Suggestion: 문법과 표현이 어색합니다. 비교할 때 'rather than'을 사용하고, 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer paper because it's classic and easier to see than my phone.'

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because it's classic and easier to view than using my phone.

× Yes, because I don't want to spend a lot of money to use less items so I often plan my shopping.

✓ Yes, because I don't want to spend a lot of money and want to use fewer items, so I often plan my shopping.

The phrase 'to use less items' is incorrect because 'less' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'items' is countable. The correct quantifier is 'fewer'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by connecting ideas with 'and' instead of 'so' to clarify the relationship.

× Yes, I always made my plan when I have to study because I feel comfortable when I have a plan about my assignments and it is quite useful to my to study about my thing.

✓ Yes, I always make my plan when I have to study because I feel comfortable when I have a plan about my assignments and it is quite useful for me to study my things.

The verb tense 'made' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'make' to match 'have to study' which is present/future. Also, 'to my to study about my thing' is incorrect; it should be 'for me to study my things' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I always made my plan when I have to study because I feel comfortable when I have a plan about my assignments and it is quite useful to my to study about my thing.

✓ Yes, I always make my plan when I have to study because I feel comfortable when I have a plan about my assignments and it is quite useful for me to study my things.

The phrase 'useful to my to study about my thing' misuses prepositions and pronouns. The correct phrase is 'useful for me to study my things' where 'for' correctly links 'useful' to the person benefiting, and 'my things' is clearer than 'my thing'.

× I think because they feel some pressure about it, yeah. Then I think it is depending on the person's personalities because they have each personalities. So yeah.

✓ I think it's because they feel some pressure about it, yeah. Then I think it depends on the person's personality because everyone has their own personality. So yeah.

The phrase 'it is depending' is incorrect; it should be 'it depends'. Also, 'person's personalities' is contradictory; a person has one personality. 'They have each personalities' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone has their own personality' to correctly use pronouns and singular/plural forms.

× I prefer paper because it is kind of classic and it is easy to see my plan rather the phone to me.

✓ I prefer paper because it is kind of classic and it is easier for me to see my plan on paper rather than on the phone.

The phrase 'rather the phone to me' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'rather than on the phone' to compare preferences properly. Also, 'easy to see my plan' is better as 'easier for me to see my plan' for clarity.

× So I always make my plan write it down on the paper.

✓ So I always make my plan and write it down on paper.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunction between two actions. Adding 'and' connects the two verbs correctly. Also, 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper' in this context.