Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I make a list when I go shop. This habit was started since I was a teenager. I found it very helpful to save money and to keep my life organized.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Does it work? Oh yes, I make a list for my work every day. It's very beneficial since every work day we need to make it as organized as we can. Every in every morning I prioritize.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think they may just don't get used to it, they prefer a more casual way to live their lives. But I do think to make the work list is a good habit.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer to make a list on my phone Cos because it's very convenient for me to add or to have something down to. I mean to mark something I have done to keep it updated in time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和用词不够自然,且句子结构较简单。建议注意动词时态和介词的正确使用,避免重复表达,并尝试使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I started this habit as a teenager. It helps me save money and stay organized when I shop.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,如“Every in every morning”不自然。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和表达方式,并用连接词增强逻辑性。
Example: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized because I prioritize my tasks each morning.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,句子连接不够自然。建议注意主谓一致,避免重复,使用更准确的表达,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it and prefer a more casual lifestyle. However, I believe making a work list is a good habit.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有口语化和不完整的表达,如“Cos because”和“to have something down to”。建议使用完整、正式的句子,避免口语缩写,并清晰表达观点。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient to add items and mark tasks as completed, which helps me keep the list updated in real time.
× Yes, I make a list when I go shop.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping.
动词go后面接动名词形式表示进行某种活动,go后面不能直接接动词原形shop,应改为shopping。
× This habit was started since I was a teenager.
✓ This habit started when I was a teenager.
使用过去时started更合适,且since后面应接具体时间点,句中用when更自然。
× Every in every morning I prioritize.
✓ Every morning I prioritize.
短语中重复使用every是不正确的,应去掉多余的in。
× I think they may just don't get used to it, they prefer a more casual way to live their lives.
✓ I think they may just not be used to it; they prefer a more casual way to live their lives.
may后面不能直接接否定形式don't,应改为may not be。
× But I do think to make the work list is a good habit.
✓ But I do think making a work list is a good habit.
think后面接动名词making更自然,且work list前应加冠词a。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone Cos because it's very convenient for me to add or to have something down to.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient for me to add or write something down.
Cos是口语缩写,应改为because;短语have something down to不正确,应改为write something down。
× I mean to mark something I have done to keep it updated in time.
✓ I mean to mark something I have done to keep it updated in time.
此句语法正确,无需修改。