List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question with a topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect verb forms.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Moreover, making a list helps me buy everything I need without missing anything.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing information. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use simple, correct sentences and linking words to explain if making lists for work is effective.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized. For example, I write down my tasks every day, which saves me time and prevents me from forgetting important duties.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and linking words. Try to use more precise vocabulary and explain your idea with a clear reason and example.

Example: Some people have a sharp memory, so they feel making lists is unnecessary. For instance, they can remember their tasks easily without writing them down.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words. Also, explain why you prefer your phone over paper with specific reasons.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have it with me. Therefore, I don't need to carry paper, which can be easily lost.

× Yes, I'll make a list because I'm go to a market and shopping center because so I buying a more things.

✓ Yes, I'll make a list because I'm going to a market and shopping center, so I buy more things.

The verb 'go' should be in the present participle form 'going' after 'I'm' to indicate a present continuous action. Also, 'buying' should be changed to 'buy' to match the simple present tense used here. The phrase 'a more things' is incorrect; 'more things' without 'a' is correct.

× So I definitely make a list because I'm very forgetted person.

✓ So I definitely make a list because I'm a very forgetful person.

The word 'forgetted' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'forgetful'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very forgetful person'.

× Yes, I am making a list letter to my wife.

✓ Yes, I am making a list letter for my wife.

The phrase 'making a list letter' is unclear; it should be 'making a list' or 'writing a letter'. Assuming the intended meaning is 'making a list for my wife', the preposition 'for' is appropriate here.

× I am not the one, Killer says he sobbed.

✓ I am not the one, he said sobbing.

The original sentence is unclear and seems to mix direct speech improperly. Correcting to reported speech with proper pronouns and verb forms improves clarity.

× So I forget many things because I am very forgetful person who was a member of him.

✓ So I forget many things because I am a very forgetful person.

The phrase 'who was a member of him' is unclear and unnecessary here. Also, 'forget' should be 'forget' in present tense to match 'I am'. The article 'a' is needed before 'very forgetful person'.

× So I made the next record list.

✓ So I made the next record list.

This sentence is grammatically correct but unclear in meaning. No grammatical correction needed based on the problem types.

× Save my time.

✓ It saves my time.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement. Adding 'It' as subject and 'saves' as verb corrects the sentence.

× Some people's memory is very sharp, so they do not waste on a time to making a list.

✓ Some people's memory is very sharp, so they do not waste time making a list.

The phrase 'waste on a time' is incorrect; 'waste time' is the correct expression. Also, 'to making' should be 'making' after 'waste time'.

× So they do not make a list of any work.

✓ So they do not make a list for any work.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate purpose.

× I am very successful person so I do not carry any kind of paper.

✓ I am a very successful person, so I do not carry any kind of paper.

The article 'a' is missing before 'very successful person'. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence clarity.

× So I prefer to make a list in our phone.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on' is used with devices like phones. Also, 'our' should be 'my' to match the speaker's perspective.