List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'sometimes I do make a list, and sometimes I forget to make a list', you can say 'I sometimes make a list, but other times I shop spontaneously.' Also, try to use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I sometimes make a list before shopping; however, other times I shop spontaneously, which often leads me to buy more items than necessary.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to complete your sentences and organise your ideas logically. Use linking words like 'first' and 'then' to show sequence. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'sort out my work tax' unless you clarify what you mean. Be specific about how making a list helps you.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work every morning. First, I prioritise my tasks, especially urgent ones like handling taxes. Then, I plan my day accordingly to ensure I complete everything on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words. For example, use 'disorganised' instead of 'not organized' and 'believe' instead of 'feel'. Also, add linking words like 'because' and 'as' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they are disorganised and believe they can manage their tasks throughout the day without one.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, say 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, making it more convenient than paper.' Also, avoid contradictory statements like 'I might lose it' referring to the phone. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to improve coherence.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's more convenient than paper and less likely to be lost.

× And in that case I often end up buying a lot of more things than required.

✓ And in that case I often end up buying a lot more things than required.

The phrase 'a lot of more things' is incorrect because 'a lot of' and 'more' both indicate quantity and should not be used together here. The correct phrase is 'a lot more things' to express a greater quantity. This is a singular and plural issue as it involves quantifiers with countable nouns.

× I need to sort out my work tax on priority basis.

✓ I need to sort out my work tax on a priority basis.

The phrase 'on priority basis' is missing the article 'a'. The correct expression is 'on a priority basis'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and articles.

× So as soon as I get to the work, the first thing in morning I do is plan my day and I put all my tasks accordingly so that I can.

✓ So as soon as I get to work, the first thing in the morning I do is plan my day and I put all my tasks accordingly so that I can.

The phrase 'get to the work' should be 'get to work' without 'the'. Also, 'in morning' should be 'in the morning'. These are incorrect uses of prepositions and articles.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because I always carry my phone with myself and it is handy paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry my phone with me and it is handy compared to paper.

The phrase 'carry my phone with myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'me' here, not 'myself'. Also, 'make list' needs an article 'a'. The phrase 'it is handy paper' is unclear and corrected to 'it is handy compared to paper' for clarity. This involves incorrect use of pronouns and articles.