List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'well' and 'umm'. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. For example, you can say, "I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy items as they run out. For instance, when I finish a box of milk, I immediately go to the store to buy more."

Example: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy items as they run out. For instance, when I finish a box of milk, I immediately go to the store to buy more.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitation and filler words to make your answer clearer. Begin with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words. For example, "Sometimes I make a list for work, especially when the end of the school year is approaching. This helps me organize my tasks better."

Example: Sometimes I make a list for work, especially when the end of the school year is approaching. This helps me organize my tasks better.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and avoid confusing phrases. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive. Personally, I avoid lists because I am disorganized and feel they don't help me."

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive. Personally, I avoid lists because I am disorganized and feel they don't help me.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly with supporting reasons. For example, "I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This makes it more convenient than using paper."

Example: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This makes it more convenient than using paper.

× I don't normally make this when I do grocery shopping.

✓ I don't normally make one when I do grocery shopping.

The word 'this' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'one' to refer to 'a list'. Using 'make this' is incorrect because 'this' is a demonstrative pronoun and does not fit the context. The correct phrase is 'make one' to indicate making a list.

× that's the time I only will be dropping by the nearest store to grab some.

✓ that's the time I will only be dropping by the nearest store to grab some.

The placement of the modal verb 'will' is incorrect. In English, 'will' should come before the adverb 'only'. The correct order is 'will only be dropping' to maintain proper modal verb usage.

× I for one doesn't like to make a list because I feel that is not something that my system would accept.

✓ I for one don't like to make a list because I feel that it is not something that my system would accept.

The pronoun 'that' is vague and should be replaced with 'it' to refer clearly to 'making a list'. Also, 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with the subject 'I'. This corrects pronoun usage and subject-verb agreement.

× I for one doesn't like to make a list because I feel that is not something that my system would accept.

✓ I for one don't like to make a list because I feel that it is not something that my system would accept.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'do not' contracted as 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. This is a subject-verb agreement error that needs correction.

× Mainly for the reason that I'm very disorganized person.

✓ Mainly for the reason that I'm a very disorganized person.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very disorganized person'. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'a' correctly modifies the noun phrase.

× So I don't think, well, making a list would help me, uh, be able to be poor.

✓ So I don't think, well, making a list would help me, uh, be able to be more organized.

The phrase 'be able to be poor' is illogical and likely a misstatement. It should be replaced with a phrase that makes sense in context, such as 'be able to be more organized'. This corrects the pronoun and meaning error.

× Definitely tone, However, I do understand that some people would not want to prefer paper.

✓ Definitely phone. However, I do understand that some people would prefer paper.

The word 'tone' is a typo and should be 'phone'. Also, 'would not want to prefer paper' is incorrect; it should be 'would prefer paper'. This corrects pronoun and word choice errors.

× However, in my case, what means umm, my thought is always with me.

✓ However, in my case, what I mean is that my thoughts are always with me.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Adding 'I mean' clarifies the subject and verb, and changing 'thought' to plural 'thoughts' fits the context better. This corrects sentence structure errors.

× That's why I used to use all the things that I need well, and yeah, I don't it's the most convenient of listening all the things.

✓ That's why I use all the things that I need well, and yeah, I think it's the most convenient way of listing all the things.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'used to use' suggests past habit but context implies present; 'I don't it's' is incorrect and should be 'I think it's'; 'listening all the things' is incorrect and should be 'listing all the things'. These corrections fix pronoun use and verb tense.