List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'in a' and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific about how the list helps you avoid overbuying.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because supermarkets have a wide variety of products, which can be overwhelming. Therefore, having a list helps me stay focused and avoid buying unnecessary items.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and unclear phrasing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid repeating words like 'to do list' multiple times.

Example: Yes, I make a daily to-do list because I work as an accountant and have many deadlines. This list helps me manage my tasks efficiently and ensures I complete everything on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and some unclear expressions. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a more balanced opinion with linking words.

Example: I'm not sure, but I think some people prefer not to make lists because they have a good memory or they feel it's unnecessary. Others might find it too time-consuming or simply prefer to work spontaneously.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, complete your sentences and explain why you prefer your phone over paper with linking words.

Example: I use both paper and my phone for making lists, but I prefer my phone because I always have it with me. Moreover, it is more convenient and helps me keep all my information organized in one place.

× I always do because then I have a plan in a in a supermarket there is lots of variety and sometimes I get overwhelmed so I need a list of product or clothes, whatever I need not to buy over buy.

✓ I always do because then I have a plan. In a supermarket, there is lots of variety and sometimes I get overwhelmed, so I need a list of products or clothes, whatever I need, so I don't overbuy.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition usage and missing punctuation, making it confusing. 'In a in a supermarket' is repetitive and should be 'In a supermarket'. Also, 'list of product' should be 'list of products' (plural). The phrase 'not to buy over buy' is incorrect; it should be 'so I don't overbuy' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I need a list of product or clothes, whatever I need not to buy over buy.

✓ I need a list of products or clothes, whatever I need, so I don't overbuy.

The word 'product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'not to buy over buy' is incorrect; it should be 'so I don't overbuy' to correctly express the idea of avoiding buying too much.

× If you mean a list of work which I should do during the day, yes I do because I I work as an accountant.

✓ If you mean a list of work that I should do during the day, yes I do because I work as an accountant.

The relative pronoun 'which' is less appropriate here; 'that' is better for defining clauses. Also, the sentence has a repeated 'I' which should be corrected. The preposition usage is acceptable but the sentence needs clarity and correction of repetition.

× I have lots of deadlines and I need some to do lists To Do List to do everything to manage to.

✓ I have lots of deadlines and I need some to-do lists to do everything and manage it.

The phrase 'some to do lists To Do List' is repetitive and unclear. It should be 'some to-do lists'. Also, 'to do everything to manage to' is incomplete and confusing; it should be 'to do everything and manage it' for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× I'm not sure about it, I just think they have good memory or they are maybe maybe lazy or they think they don't need the least.

✓ I'm not sure about it. I just think they have a good memory, or maybe they are lazy, or they think they don't need the list.

The phrase 'they have good memory' needs the article 'a' before 'good memory'. The repeated 'maybe' should be removed. 'They don't need the least' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't need the list'. Also, the sentence should be split for clarity.

× I use both of them, but if I have to choose umm, I would say uh my phone because phone I have all the time with me Without phone we can can't we can't pay. So I'm using wallet. That's why I'm sure if I go somewhere I have all my.

✓ I use both of them, but if I have to choose, I would say my phone because I have it with me all the time. Without a phone, we can't pay. So I use a wallet. That's why I'm sure if I go somewhere, I have everything with me.

The original sentence has pronoun confusion and incomplete thoughts. 'Because phone I have all the time with me' should be 'because I have it with me all the time'. 'Without phone we can can't we can't pay' is incorrect and should be 'Without a phone, we can't pay'. 'I'm using wallet' should be 'I use a wallet'. The last sentence is incomplete and should be completed for clarity.