Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, of course, because a list can make me remember the things I need so that I can looking for the things more quickly. For example, I bring a list during my shopping time so I can find the things I need easily.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I always make a list for my study. For example during my final months I will make a list of everything I need to do so it can makes me categorize all the work it work for.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think maybe some people will think a list will limit them. For example, when some people face to a list full with filled with tasks, they will feel stress. So I think that's the reason.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Well, I prefer to make this to my phone because I think paper is inconvenient for me to carry with. I could easily lost a paper when I go to shopping or other ways, but I can put up my to see what I need to do easily.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“looking for”应为“look for”,且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子结构,使用更准确的时态和表达方式。
Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need. For example, I bring my list with me so I can find items quickly and not forget anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误,如“it can makes me”应为“it helps me”,且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的动词形式,并明确说明列表如何帮助你。
Example: Yes, I always make a list for my studies. For example, during my final months, I make a list of all tasks to help me organize and prioritize my work effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不够自然,且有重复和语法错误,如“face to a list full with filled with tasks”。建议简化句子,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达。
Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted. For example, seeing a long list of tasks can make them feel stressed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“make this to my phone”,“I could easily lost a paper”,“I can put up my to see”。建议使用正确的动词形式和更清晰的表达。
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient to carry. I might lose paper lists when shopping, but my phone is always with me, so I can easily check my tasks.
× I can looking for the things more quickly.
✓ I can look for the things more quickly.
这里的情态动词can后面应该接动词原形,不能用动名词形式。
× I bring a list during my shopping time so I can find the things I need easily.
✓ I bring a list during my shopping time so I can find the things I need easily.
此句中bring用法正确,无需改动。
× it can makes me categorize all the work it work for.
✓ it can make me categorize all the work it works for.
情态动词can后动词用原形,makes应改为make;后半句it work for应为it works for,主语是第三人称单数,动词需加s。
× when some people face to a list full with filled with tasks, they will feel stress.
✓ when some people face a list full of tasks, they will feel stressed.
face后不加介词to;full with应改为full of;filled with重复且不必要;feel stress应改为feel stressed,形容词形式更合适。
× I prefer to make this to my phone because I think paper is inconvenient for me to carry with.
✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because I think paper is inconvenient for me to carry.
make后接介词应为on my phone;carry后不需要with。
× I could easily lost a paper when I go to shopping or other ways, but I can put up my to see what I need to do easily.
✓ I could easily lose a paper when I go shopping or other places, but I can put it up to see what I need to do easily.
could后接动词原形lose,不是lost;go to shopping应为go shopping;other ways表达不准确,改为other places更合适;put up my不完整,应为put it up。