List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, avoid phrases like 'makes me to remember' and 'there are more chances I would forgot'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember all the items I need. Since I am often busy with other tasks, having a list ensures I don't forget anything important.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammatical accuracy. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms like 'will be helps'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work to balance it with my personal life. Because I have many responsibilities, I sometimes forget important tasks. Therefore, making a list helps me remember and prioritize my work effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer linking words. Avoid phrases like 'avoid to make the list'. Instead, use 'avoid making lists'. Also, try to provide a more specific reason.

Example: Some people have a strong memory, so they think making lists is unnecessary. Additionally, they may feel that creating a list takes extra time, which they prefer to avoid.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because I might forget or lose a paper list. With my phone, I can carry the list everywhere and access it easily whenever I need.

× Yes, I make a list before going any shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list before going to any shop.

The preposition 'to' is required after 'going' when referring to a destination. Without 'to', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Adding 'to' correctly links the verb 'going' to the noun 'shop'.

× It makes me to remember the all the items which I need to purchase because most of the time I would be busy with other tasks so there are more chances I would forgot.

✓ It helps me remember all the items which I need to purchase because most of the time I am busy with other tasks, so there is a higher chance I would forget.

The phrase 'makes me to remember' is incorrect; 'helps me remember' is appropriate. Also, 'the all the items' is redundant; 'all the items' is correct. 'Would forgot' is incorrect; the correct form is 'would forget'. The sentence also needs proper tense consistency and article usage.

× As I make list of my work because I need to balance my personal life and work.

✓ I make a list of my work because I need to balance my personal life and work.

The phrase 'As I make list' is incorrect; 'As' is unnecessary here and 'list' needs an article 'a'. Removing 'As' and adding 'a' corrects the sentence structure.

× Due to my personal life I may forgot some more some most important tasks in my work.

✓ Due to my personal life, I may forget some of the most important tasks in my work.

'May forgot' is incorrect; the correct form is 'may forget'. Also, 'some more some most important' is confusing and incorrect; it should be 'some of the most important'. Adding a comma after 'life' improves readability.

× That's why making this list will be helps me out to remember the most important.

✓ That's why making this list helps me remember the most important tasks.

The phrase 'will be helps' is incorrect; 'helps' is sufficient here. Also, 'helps me out to remember' should be 'helps me remember'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.

× Some people may have more memory power.

✓ Some people may have better memory power.

While not strictly a preposition error, 'more memory power' is less natural than 'better memory power'. Using 'better' is more appropriate when comparing abilities.

× Due to that they may feel making a list may not be important for them and they need to give additional time for that one.

✓ Because of that, they may feel that making a list is not important for them and that they need to spend additional time on it.

'Due to' is better replaced with 'Because of' at the start of a sentence. 'Feel making a list may not be important' needs 'that' to introduce the clause. 'Give additional time for that one' is awkward; 'spend additional time on it' is correct.

× Maybe due to this reason they may avoid to make the list.

✓ Maybe for this reason, they may avoid making the list.

'Avoid to make' is incorrect; the verb 'avoid' should be followed by the gerund form 'making'. Also, 'due to this reason' is better expressed as 'for this reason'.

× I would prefer to make a list in my phone rather than the paper, because if I note the list in a paper, I may forgot it or I may leave it anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper, because if I write the list on paper, I may forget it or leave it somewhere.

'Would prefer' is less direct than 'prefer' and 'on my phone' is the correct preposition. 'Note the list in a paper' is incorrect; 'write the list on paper' is correct. 'May forgot' should be 'may forget'. 'Leave it anywhere' is better as 'leave it somewhere'.

× Instead, if I was added all those details in my phone, I can carry anywhere and.

✓ Instead, if I add all those details to my phone, I can carry it anywhere.

'If I was added' is incorrect; it should be 'if I add'. 'In my phone' should be 'to my phone'. The sentence is incomplete and needs 'it' after 'carry' to refer to the phone or list.