Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Before I go shopping I will make a list because I think I can directly to purchase my things.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, sometimes I can make a list when I am working because I think I can do. Everything that I want to do it.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Because they think making list will constrict them to do extra things.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Sometimes I prefer to make a list on people because I think. If I make a list on my phone, I can play my phone to distraction myself.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的习惯,但句子结构不够自然,且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意时态和句子完整性。
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me buy everything I need efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不够清晰,句子结构混乱,表达的意思不明确。建议直接回答问题,并用连贯的句子说明做清单的效果。
Example: Yes, I sometimes make a to-do list at work because it helps me organize my tasks and complete them on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 表达不够准确,单词使用错误(constrict应为restrict),句子结构简单。建议使用更准确的词汇,并扩展理由使回答更具体。
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility and prevents them from doing spontaneous activities.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答中有明显的错误(people应为paper),句子不完整且表达不清。建议注意单词拼写,使用完整句子,并清楚表达偏好和原因。
Example: I prefer to make lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting and I might lose focus.
× Because they think making list will constrict them to do extra things.
✓ Because they think making lists will restrict them from doing extra things.
这里'making list'中的'list'应为复数形式,因为指的是一般的列表,且动词'restrict'后应接介词'from',后面动词用动名词形式'doing'。此外,'constrict'用法不当,应改为'restrict'。
× Because they think making list will constrict them to do extra things.
✓ Because they think making lists will restrict them from doing extra things.
'list'应为复数形式,因为这里指的是一般的列表,不是特指一个列表。
× Because they think making list will constrict them to do extra things.
✓ Because they think making lists will restrict them from doing extra things.
动词'restrict'后应接介词'from',表示限制某人做某事。
× Sometimes I prefer to make a list on people because I think.
✓ Sometimes I prefer to make a list on paper because I think.
'people'是复数名词,表示人们,这里应为'paper'表示纸张。
× Sometimes I prefer to make a list on people because I think.
✓ Sometimes I prefer to make a list on paper because I think.
介词'on'后应接表示载体的名词'paper',而不是'people'。
× Yes, sometimes I can make a list when I am working because I think I can do. Everything that I want to do it.
✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list when I am working because I think I can do everything that I want to do.
句子结构混乱,'I can do.'后不应断句,'Everything that I want to do it.'中多余的'it'应去掉。
× Because they think making list will constrict them to do extra things.
✓ Because they think making lists will restrict them from doing extra things.
动词'restrict'后应接动名词形式'doing',表示限制做某事。
× If I make a list on my phone, I can play my phone to distraction myself.
✓ If I make a list on my phone, I can play with my phone to distract myself.
'play'后应接介词'with'表示玩弄某物,'to distraction myself'应改为不定式'distract myself',表示分散注意力。