List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'uh' and 'so'. Make your answer more concise and clear by directly stating your reason and giving a specific example. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items otherwise. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk, but with a list, I can remember everything I need.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to connect ideas logically. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember important tasks. For instance, when I write down my duties, I can organize my work better and complete it more efficiently.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and improve grammar. Use clearer linking phrases such as 'for example' and 'because'. Provide a more structured answer with a clear topic sentence and specific reasons why some people dislike lists.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time. For example, my friend prefers to rely on memory rather than writing things down, thinking it saves time.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear preference with reasons and use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast options. Make sure your answer is complete and coherent.

Example: It depends on the situation; sometimes I use paper lists, but I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit them.

× Yes, I do make a list when when I shop because, uh, when I go to a shop, there are lots of things which I forgot forgot.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop because, uh, when I go to a shop, there are lots of things which I forget.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense to express a habitual action. Repeating 'forgot' is also incorrect. Use 'forget' to match the present tense context.

× So that's why I make a list of everything on everything.

✓ So that's why I make a list of everything.

The phrase 'on everything' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the contents of the list.

× Yes, I do make a list of for a list for my work and it's really work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work and it really works.

The phrase 'of for a list for' is redundant and incorrect. Use 'make a list for my work'. Also, 'it's really work' should be 'it really works' to indicate effectiveness.

× For example, when when I forget something on my on my work work, so I make a list for that work so I remember clearly.

✓ For example, when I forget something in my work, I make a list for that work so I remember clearly.

The phrase 'on my work work' is incorrect; 'in my work' is appropriate. Also, 'when when' is repeated unnecessarily. The sentence should be in present tense to describe habitual actions.

× So most of people think that it is a totally wastage of time to making lists, but I don't think so, uh, apart from this, like for example, uh, umm, I have a, a friend which she always think like if I'm making a list, it they're grabbing my time.

✓ So most people think that it is a total waste of time to make lists, but I don't think so. For example, I have a friend who always thinks that if I'm making a list, it takes up her time.

'Most of people' should be 'most people'. 'Totally wastage' is incorrect; use 'total waste'. 'To making lists' should be 'to make lists'. 'Which she' is incorrect; use 'who'. 'Always think' should be 'always thinks' for subject-verb agreement. 'It they're grabbing my time' is unclear; corrected to 'it takes up her time' for clarity.

× So I go on a work, I go on a shop.

✓ So I go to work, I go to a shop.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition to indicate destination.

× So I'm using my own thinking, not a list.

✓ So I use my own thinking, not a list.

'I'm using' is present continuous, but the context suggests habitual action, so simple present 'I use' is more appropriate.

× So it, so it is according to, uh, according to situation.

✓ So it depends on the situation.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. Using 'depends on the situation' is a clearer and grammatically correct present tense expression.

× Sometime I prefer to make a list on paper and sometime I prefer to make a list on phone.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to make a list on paper and sometimes I prefer to make a list on my phone.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession.

× But, uh, to be honest, I prefer to make a, make a list on phone because, uh, I, it is not, so I can't.

✓ But, uh, to be honest, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence that fits the context.