List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi như 'help me don't impose buying'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu.

Example: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me avoid unnecessary purchases. Moreover, following the list allows me to save money and stay organized.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Tránh dùng câu ngắn không đầy đủ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I can improve my skills and perform better in my profession, which I really enjoy.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng câu hỏi không cần thiết trong câu trả lời. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel lazy or prefer to relax during their free time or holidays. However, I believe making a list is helpful for everyone.

Suggestion: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh. Câu 'I love roast the item when I finishing' không rõ nghĩa và sai ngữ pháp. Hãy nói rõ lý do bạn thích viết trên giấy và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy writing in my notebook. Also, I like to cross off items when I finish them, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× Yes, I always make a list when I go to the shopping because it help me don't impose buying and follow the list so that it can help me save money and organization.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me avoid unnecessary buying and follow the list so that it can help me save money and stay organized.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The phrase 'don't impose buying' is unclear and corrected to 'avoid unnecessary buying'. 'Save money and organization' is corrected to 'save money and stay organized' for clarity and correctness.

× Make sure. Make a list for my work, help me stay organized and improve my skills and follow my profession better. So that I very enjoy it.

✓ Sure. Making a list for my work helps me stay organized, improve my skills, and follow my profession better. So, I really enjoy it.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'Make sure' is corrected to 'Sure' as an affirmative response. The phrase 'Make a list for my work, help me...' is corrected to 'Making a list for my work helps me...' to form a proper sentence with subject and verb agreement. 'So that I very enjoy it' is corrected to 'So, I really enjoy it' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Oh I think because they lazy and they want to take many time for relax with and when they when holiday. And is it a bad idea? So I think anyone should make a list.

✓ Oh, I think it's because they are lazy and want to take more time to relax, especially when they are on holiday. Is that a bad idea? So, I think everyone should make a list.

The pronoun usage is incorrect and unclear. 'They lazy' is corrected to 'they are lazy'. 'Take many time for relax with and when they when holiday' is corrected to 'take more time to relax, especially when they are on holiday' for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Anyone' is changed to 'everyone' to better fit the context.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I really enjoy writing by him on notebook and I love roast the item when I finishing.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I really enjoy writing by hand in a notebook, and I love crossing off the items when I finish.

'Writing by him' is incorrect; it should be 'writing by hand'. 'On notebook' is corrected to 'in a notebook' because we write in a notebook. 'Roast the item' is incorrect and corrected to 'crossing off the items'. 'When I finishing' is corrected to 'when I finish' to use the correct verb form.