List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more direct and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, then adding specific reasons. Avoid filler phrases and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused. For example, I know exactly which aisles to visit, which saves me time. Sometimes, I even joke that I'm acting like a grandma because of this habit.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain why making a list helps you.

Example: Yes, I almost always make a to-do list every morning because it helps me stay organised. When I complete all the tasks on the list, I feel a sense of fulfilment, which makes my day productive.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and difficult to follow. Focus on giving a clear opinion with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid vague phrases and try to express your thoughts more precisely.

Example: I think some people dislike making lists because it can feel stressful or restrictive. Also, people who work in creative fields might prefer to be more spontaneous rather than following a fixed plan.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to organise your answer clearly by comparing both methods and explaining your preference. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to improve coherence.

Example: Personally, I prefer writing my daily to-do list on paper because crossing off tasks with a pen gives me a sense of accomplishment. However, I also use my phone's notes app for important reminders because it's convenient and always with me.

× I also even making fun of myself like I'm acting like a grandma.

✓ I also even make fun of myself like I'm acting like a grandma.

The verb 'making' is incorrectly used here; after 'also even' the base form 'make' should be used to maintain correct verb form in present tense.

× I almost make A to do list every morning and I feel like it makes me to stay organized.

✓ I almost make a to-do list every morning and I feel like it helps me stay organized.

The phrase 'makes me to stay' is incorrect; modal verb 'helps me stay' or 'makes me stay' without 'to' is correct. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation.

× And once all the everything on the list was taken, it gave me kind of fulfillment and make a productive day.

✓ And once everything on the list was done, it gave me a kind of fulfillment and made for a productive day.

'Was taken' is incorrect for tasks; 'was done' is appropriate. 'Make' should be past tense 'made' to agree with 'gave'. Also, 'all the everything' is redundant; 'everything' suffices.

× While a person that phoned me 'cause since I tended to make a list I could only guessing.

✓ While a person phoned me because I tend to make a list, I could only guess.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Could only guessing' should be 'could only guess' to use correct verb form. 'Since I tended' should be 'because I tend' for clarity and tense consistency.

× Maybe part of the reason is there.

✓ Maybe part of the reason is that.

The preposition 'there' is incorrectly used; 'that' is the correct demonstrative pronoun to refer to a reason.

× If there's a lesson, it can feel the pressure there I guess.

✓ If there's a lesson, people can feel the pressure, I guess.

'It' is vague here; 'people' clarifies the subject who feels pressure. Also, 'there' is unnecessary and awkward in this context.

× And also for some people tend to be working a more like creative way.

✓ And also, some people tend to work in a more creative way.

The sentence has pronoun and verb form issues. 'Tend to be working' is awkward; 'tend to work' is better. 'A more like creative way' is incorrect; 'in a more creative way' is correct prepositional phrase.

× When I'm making the lace in the early morning, I tend to write it down on the paper because once one thing is done, you take it with the physical pen and give you a sense of accomplishment.

✓ When I'm making the list in the early morning, I tend to write it down on paper because once one thing is done, you tick it off with a physical pen and it gives you a sense of accomplishment.

'Making the lace' is a typo; should be 'making the list'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' without 'the'. 'Take it with the physical pen' is incorrect; 'tick it off with a physical pen' is the correct expression. 'Give you' needs subject 'it' to be grammatically correct.

× And But I also got used the notes on my phone to write something important, which.

✓ But I also use the notes on my phone to write something important.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'And' and 'But' together. 'Got used the notes' is incorrect; 'use the notes' is correct. The sentence is incomplete and should end properly.