List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by adding a linking word and a bit more detail to make it sound more natural and effective. Try to avoid redundancy and keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I always prepare a list when I go shopping because it helps me buy the right things and avoid forgetting anything important.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how the list helps your work. Also, correct sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I have many tasks to remember. Therefore, making a list helps me organise my day better and makes my work more efficient.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and is somewhat repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more concise. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

Example: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it can be tiring at first. However, they often realise its importance later since it helps them remember everything.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly, use linking words, and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, be specific about the advantages of using a phone for lists.

Example: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier and more convenient to check off completed items. Moreover, I don't have to worry about losing a paper list when I carry my phone everywhere.

× Yes, I prepare a list when I go for shopping to buy the right things.

✓ Yes, I prepare a list when I go shopping to buy the right things.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'for'. This is a common article and preposition usage error. Removing 'for' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I usually make list for my work because there are a lot of things that I need to be in my mind.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because there are a lot of things that I need to keep in my mind.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, the phrase 'need to be in my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'need to keep in my mind'. This correction addresses article usage and verb phrase correctness.

× So making a list helps me to prepare for myself for the better tomorrow and it also helps my work to be easier and a lot more efficient.

✓ So making a list helps me prepare myself for a better tomorrow and also makes my work easier and much more efficient.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and redundancy. 'Helps me to prepare for myself' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me prepare myself'. 'For the better tomorrow' should be 'for a better tomorrow'. Also, 'helps my work to be easier' is better expressed as 'makes my work easier'. These changes improve sentence structure and clarity.

× In my opinion, some people doesn't like making lists, because in the beginning making a list or a checklist is very tiring, but people do not understand its importance unless they start making one.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists, because in the beginning making a list or a checklist is very tiring, but people do not understand its importance unless they start making one.

The subject 'some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× If they're making the checklist or the habit of getting a checklist is really important because it helps us to remember everything.

✓ Making a checklist or developing the habit of using one is really important because it helps us remember everything.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'If they're making the checklist or the habit of getting a checklist' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure by removing unnecessary conditional phrasing and simplifying the expression.

× I prefer to make a list on the phone because it is more easy and convenient for us to check whether the items are on the list are being completed.

✓ I prefer to make a list on the phone because it is easier and more convenient for us to check whether the items on the list are being completed.

The comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier', not 'more easy'. Also, the phrase 'whether the items are on the list are being completed' is redundant; it should be 'whether the items on the list are being completed'. This correction addresses adjective usage and sentence clarity.

× Carrying a paper all the time does not make sense sometimes because we may have a tendency to miss the paper somewhere, so it is more.

✓ Carrying a paper all the time does not always make sense because we may tend to lose it somewhere, so using a phone is better.

The original sentence ends abruptly and is unclear. 'Does not make sense sometimes' is better expressed as 'does not always make sense'. 'Have a tendency to miss the paper somewhere' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'tend to lose it somewhere'. The phrase 'so it is more' is incomplete and needs clarification. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.