List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding specific details. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week, I made a list before buying groceries for my family, which saved me time and prevented me from forgetting items.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and clearly. Use complete sentences and provide specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and logical.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it works well. For instance, when I plan a week with my parents, I write down all the things I need to do, which helps me stay organized and not forget anything.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and complete by explaining reasons clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or difficult to organize their thoughts. However, I believe making a list is important because it helps you remember what you need and saves time.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly, using complete sentences. Explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to edit. Paper lists can be lost or damaged, whereas my phone is always with me, so I can check my list anytime.

× Actually, when I moved to work, when I purchased something, I make a list.

✓ Actually, when I moved to work, when I purchased something, I made a list.

The sentence describes past events ('moved' and 'purchased'), so the verb 'make' should be in the past tense 'made' to maintain tense consistency.

× So it's this list is very important to make a shopping.

✓ So this list is very important for shopping.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect structure ('it's this list is'). Also, 'make a shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'for shopping'.

× For example, when my mom asked me about.

✓ For example, when my mom asked me about it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'asked me about'. Adding 'it' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Actually, I I make a list for work, for example, when they're a week with my mother and father, I go to shopping and I read all the instructions of this list and.

✓ Actually, I make a list for work. For example, when I spend a week with my mother and father, I go shopping and read all the instructions on this list.

The original sentence has pronoun errors ('they're a week' should be 'I spend a week'), unnecessary repetition ('I I'), and awkward phrasing ('go to shopping' should be 'go shopping'). Also, 'instructions of this list' should be 'instructions on this list'.

× I see some people when they go shopping, they didn't make a list because it's difficult to make it personally.

✓ I see some people when they go shopping, they don't make a list because it's difficult to make it personally.

The sentence mixes present tense ('I see', 'they go') with past tense 'didn't make'. To maintain tense consistency, 'didn't make' should be 'don't make'.

× So I think it's most important thing when when you go to knowing about the things that you.

✓ So I think it's the most important thing when you know about the things that you need.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. 'Go to knowing' is incorrect; it should be 'know'. Also, the sentence needs completion for clarity.

× Actually I prefer make a list of my phone because it's easy way to remember things and it is difficult to make it in a paper because there for example some inexpensive paper and some difficult to make this.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's an easy way to remember things, and it is difficult to make one on paper because, for example, some paper is inexpensive and some are difficult to use.

The phrase 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. 'Make a list of my phone' should be 'make a list on my phone'. 'In a paper' should be 'on paper'. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity.