List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ ngữ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary things, which saves money.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'for my girl'. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete. This helps me keep track of my daily duties and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Example: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down. Also, they may feel that making lists wastes their time.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn. Sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. However, if I don't have my phone, I write the list on paper first and then transfer it to my phone later.

× OK I I prefer make a list when I shop because I can remember all the items I have to buy and it helps me to save money to to buy unnecessary things and also I can.

✓ OK I prefer making a list when I shop because I can remember all the items I have to buy and it helps me to save money by not buying unnecessary things and also I can.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing a general preference. Therefore, 'prefer make' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer making'. Also, 'to to buy' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'by not buying' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I always make a list for my girl because I I have a lot of work to do so I have to write down and make a list for this.

✓ I always make a list for my job because I have a lot of work to do, so I have to write it down and make a list for this.

The word 'girl' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse; the correct word in this context is 'job'. Also, 'write down and make a list for this' is redundant; 'write it down' suffices. Pronoun 'this' refers to the work, so it is acceptable.

× It seemed to me that they don't want to have. They don't want to spend time to write down a list because they think they can remember everything and do it effective without the.

✓ It seems to me that they don't want to spend time writing down a list because they think they can remember everything and do it effectively without one.

The verb tense should be present 'seems' to match the context. 'Spend time to write' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time writing' (gerund after 'spend time'). 'Do it effective' should be 'do it effectively' because 'effectively' is an adverb modifying the verb 'do'. The sentence was incomplete; adding 'one' clarifies the object (list).

× Yes I I prefer my phone more than the paper but if I don't have any phone in my with me I always write it down in the paper and after that I will take it in my phone to keep with me.

✓ Yes, I prefer my phone more than paper, but if I don't have my phone with me, I always write it down on paper and after that, I will save it on my phone to keep with me.

The phrase 'in my with me' is incorrect; it should be 'with me'. 'Write it down in the paper' should be 'write it down on paper' because 'on' is the correct preposition for writing on surfaces. 'Take it in my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'save it on my phone'. Also, 'the paper' is incorrect here; 'paper' without 'the' is appropriate.