List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save money. I write down only the items I need and avoid buying unnecessary things.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng bị lặp lại và thiếu sự mạch lạc, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and work more efficiently. For example, I list the tasks I need to complete during the day or on weekends.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng đúng thì và số nhiều, cũng như dùng từ phù hợp hơn.

Example: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it's unnecessary to write down everything they need. Moreover, they feel confident organizing their shopping without a list.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có sự lặp lại và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than paper. For example, I can carry my phone everywhere and add items to my list whenever I need to.

× I I often write down the thing when I the thing I need to buy and only buy them.

✓ I often write down the things I need to buy and only buy them.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Using singular 'thing' is incorrect when talking about multiple items to buy.

× For. For example, I make the list for work for. I make the list of work for learning during the day or on weekends.

✓ For example, I make a list of work tasks to learn during the day or on weekends.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. It needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think some people dislikes to make list because they believe it is unnecessary to crack down everything they need to buy.

✓ I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it is unnecessary to write down everything they need to buy.

The verb 'dislikes' should be 'dislike' because the subject 'some people' is plural. Also, 'to make list' should be 'making lists' for correct verb form and plural noun.

× Moreover, they also think that they can organize their shopping themselves without a list.

✓ Moreover, they also think that they can organize their shopping by themselves without a list.

The phrase 'themselves' should be preceded by 'by' to correctly express the meaning of doing something independently.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think the I think it's more comfortable than making a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient than making a list on paper.

The sentence has a repeated phrase 'I think the I think'. Also, 'comfortable' is not the best adjective here; 'convenient' fits better for ease of use.

× For example, I can carry my phone everywhere and make a list when I need.

✓ For example, I can carry my phone everywhere and make a list whenever I need to.

The phrase 'when I need' is incomplete; it should be 'whenever I need to' to indicate any time the need arises.