List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid buying unnecessary items, which keeps my budget clear.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi lặp từ và câu chưa mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Example: Definitely yes. When I make a list, I can complete all my work tasks, and if I forget something, I can check the reminder on my list.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'leash' không đúng nghĩa). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time or they prefer to remember things without writing them down.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi và dùng từ phù hợp. Sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to access anywhere. However, if I don't have my phone, I write it down on paper first and then transfer it later.

× it helps me to reduce time to shopping

✓ it helps me to reduce time spent shopping

The phrase 'reduce time to shopping' is incorrect because 'reduce time' should be followed by a gerund or noun phrase indicating the activity. The correct preposition is 'spent' to indicate the time used for shopping. Suggestion: use 'reduce time spent shopping'.

× and always and also help me to ship money to buy unnecessary things

✓ and also helps me to save money by avoiding buying unnecessary things

The original sentence has redundant conjunctions 'and always and also' and the verb 'help' does not agree with the singular subject. Also, 'ship money' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'save money'. Suggestion: use 'and also helps me to save money by avoiding buying unnecessary things'.

× and clear to my budget

✓ and keeps my budget clear

The phrase 'clear to my budget' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keeps my budget clear' meaning to maintain clarity in budgeting. Suggestion: use 'keeps my budget clear'.

× if I miss some tasks I can open the reminder and check check the list

✓ if I miss some tasks, I can open the reminder and check the list

The sentence has a repeated word 'check check' which is a mistake. Also, a comma is needed after the conditional clause for clarity. Suggestion: remove the duplicate word and add a comma after 'tasks'.

× they don't want to spend the time to write down the leash like in the paper

✓ they don't want to spend time writing the list down on paper

The phrase 'spend the time to write down the leash like in the paper' is incorrect. 'Spend time' is followed by a gerund, and 'leash' is likely a mishearing of 'list'. Also, 'on paper' is the correct preposition. Suggestion: use 'spend time writing the list down on paper'.

× they feel more tractable and like

✓ they feel more distracted and dislike it

The phrase 'more tractable and like' is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly intended 'distracted' and 'dislike it'. Suggestion: clarify the meaning and use correct adjectives and pronouns.

× If I do not have phone A in the time I want to make a list

✓ If I do not have my phone at the time I want to make a list

The phrase 'phone A in the time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'my phone at the time'. Suggestion: use 'my phone at the time'.

× I always make write down it in the paper

✓ I always write it down on paper

The phrase 'make write down it' is incorrect. The correct verb phrase is 'write it down'. Also, 'on paper' is the correct preposition. Suggestion: use 'write it down on paper'.

× note it in the in my phone

✓ note it in my phone

The phrase 'in the in my phone' has redundant prepositions. The correct phrase is 'note it in my phone'. Suggestion: remove extra prepositions.

× and because it's easy to see and use and drink everywhere I want

✓ because it's easy to see, use, and access everywhere I want

The phrase 'and drink everywhere I want' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'bring'. Also, the conjunctions are redundant. Suggestion: use 'because it's easy to see, use, and access everywhere I want'.