List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "It makes me easier" should be "It makes things easier for me," and "it enhance" should be "it enhances." Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. Try to keep your answer within 5 sentences and use more precise vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it makes things easier for me and saves time. Moreover, it helps me avoid impulse buying, which improves my overall shopping experience.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but lacks grammatical accuracy and clear linking. For example, "it manage very well" is unclear and should be "it helps me manage my tasks well." Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repeating "stress" twice in the same sentence. Try to be more concise and precise.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me manage my tasks efficiently and reduces stress. As a result, I can finish my work before the deadline without pressure.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward expressions and unclear phrases. For example, "making this" should be "making lists," and "we can make it" is unclear. Also, avoid subjective judgments like "it is a wrong attitude" without explanation. Use linking words like "because" and provide clearer reasons. Try to express your opinion politely and clearly.

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary, especially if they have a good memory. However, in my opinion, making lists is helpful because it ensures nothing is forgotten.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats phrases and has some grammatical errors. For example, "it helps to it helps to keep me secure" is repetitive and unclear. Use linking words like "because" and avoid repeating "stress" multiple times. Try to be more concise and clear in your explanation.

Example: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because it feels more secure. Also, I don't have to worry about forgetting important items or the phone's battery running out.

× Yes, I make a list when I *** every time.

✓ Yes, I make a list every time I go shopping.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb after 'I'. The phrase 'when I ***' is incorrect because the verb is missing. The correct form should include the verb 'go shopping' to complete the sentence meaningfully.

× It makes me easier and it saves my time.

✓ It makes things easier for me and saves my time.

The phrase 'It makes me easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is an adjective and cannot directly describe a person without a preposition. The correct expression is 'makes things easier for me'. Also, 'saves my time' is better as 'saves me time' or 'saves my time' is acceptable but 'saves me time' is more natural.

× Also it helps me keep away from impulse buying and it enhance my shopping experience.

✓ Also, it helps me keep away from impulse buying and it enhances my shopping experience.

The verb 'enhance' should be in the third person singular form 'enhances' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× It makes my work efficient and convenient, it helps reduce my stress and it manage very well and I can finish my work before deadline without any stress or pressure.

✓ It makes my work efficient and convenient, it helps reduce my stress, and it manages things very well, so I can finish my work before the deadline without any stress or pressure.

The verb 'manage' should be 'manages' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, adding 'things' after 'manages' clarifies the meaning. Commas and conjunctions are added for better sentence structure.

× I think some people don't like making this because they believe it is unnecessary and extra, maybe because their memory power is good and they can memorize what they have to buy.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they believe it is unnecessary and extra, maybe because their memory is good and they can memorize what they have to buy.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and should be replaced with 'lists' to clearly refer to the subject. Also, 'memory power' is better expressed as 'memory'.

× But in my personal opinion it is a wrong attitude and we can make it.

✓ But in my personal opinion, it is a wrong attitude and we should change it.

The phrase 'we can make it' is unclear and incorrect in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'we should change it' or 'we can change it'. Also, a comma after 'opinion' improves readability.

× I prefer to make a list on my paper rather than my phone because it helps to it helps to keep me secure and I don't have to stress about forgetting important things that I have to buy and also I don't have to stress about the battery life of a phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because it helps keep me secure, and I don't have to worry about forgetting important things I have to buy. Also, I don't have to worry about the battery life of my phone.

The phrase 'it helps to it helps to' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Make a list on my paper' should be 'make a list on paper'. Prepositions 'on' are needed before 'paper' and 'my phone'. 'Stress about' is better replaced with 'worry about'. Also, 'the battery life of a phone' is better as 'the battery life of my phone' for clarity.