List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain how you use your phone to remind you of the shopping list.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone. This helps me remember what I need to buy when I go to the store, so I don't forget anything important.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and does not provide any explanation. Even if the answer is negative, try to add a reason or detail to support your response. This will make your answer more complete and natural.

Example: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to keep tasks in my mind. However, sometimes I write notes if I have many things to do.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to directly address why some people might not like making lists, and use linking words to organize your ideas. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and check your grammar.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory. However, lists can be helpful to organize tasks and avoid forgetting important things.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating words like 'always'.

Example: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me when I go shopping. This makes it simple and convenient to check my list anytime.

× Uh, I've write in, in my phone and when I go to the shopping, uh, I must, I see, uh, in my phone and do I need to remind me?

✓ Uh, I've written in my phone and when I go shopping, I must see in my phone and remind myself.

The phrase 'I've write' is incorrect because 'write' should be in the past participle form 'written' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' without 'the'. The phrase 'do I need to remind me?' is incorrect; it should be 'remind myself' because the reflexive pronoun is needed when the subject and object are the same.

× when I go to the shopping

✓ when I go shopping

The phrase 'go to the shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an activity and does not require the definite article 'the' or the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping'.

× do I need to remind me?

✓ remind myself

When the subject and object of a verb are the same person, a reflexive pronoun should be used. 'Remind me' is incorrect here; it should be 'remind myself'.

× I think most of people like when when they make a make a list because I think it's very, very simple and good behavior because you because it's help us to remember what we want.

✓ I think most people like when they make a list because I think it's very simple and good behavior because it helps us to remember what we want.

The phrase 'most of people' is incorrect; it should be 'most people' without 'of'. The repeated words 'when when' and 'make a make a' are errors and should be corrected. Also, 'it's help us' is incorrect; the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× because it's help us to remember what we want.

✓ because it helps us to remember what we want.

The verb 'help' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it'. Therefore, 'help' should be 'helps'.

× I prefer to make a list in my phone because when I go to shopping I always my phone is always with me and I think it's simple for me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I go shopping, my phone is always with me and I think it's simple for me.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone for lists; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. The phrase 'I always my phone is always with me' is redundant and should be corrected to 'my phone is always with me'.